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高考英語寫作剖析
本次考試的作文題目如下：
描述你在學校的一次午餐，具體要求如下：
詳細描述用餐的情況
簡要表述你對這次午餐的感受
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of the classroompoured all students but one。
Unlikemy peers, Iwas in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rushthrough lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere。
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。
Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges。(219words)
一、語法解構
現在分詞作定語 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang
倒裝句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be
不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen
狀語從句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed。
現在分詞作狀語 Waiting formy turnpatiently,
過去分詞作狀語 the wide range offood prepared by the schoolwas superior
代詞用法
(1)thewide range of foodprepared by the schoolwas superior in nu-tritional value to that found elsewhere。
(2)enjoy the pleasure provided by theflavorful food
并列句 The typical schedule of a highschooler is extraordinarily hectic and thuslunch break is a rare time
定語從句
(1)thus lunch break is a raretime when overworked students can winddown
(2) a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses
主語從句 What I usually like to doover lunch is have amindless conversation
過去分詞作主語補足語 We roundedoff our lunch with a dessert, refreshed andsatisfied。
強調句 it is not the food butmy atti-tude towards life that affordsme pleasure
二、詞匯解構
pour out沖出
rush through草草了事
amassive queue 排長龍
greasy油膩的
aroma香味
extraordinarily 特別地
hectic忙碌
flavorful美味的
wind down休息、放松
pampermy taste buds寵愛我的味蕾
smell the roses [習語]享受生活
bone-breaking 累人的
empower 給人動力
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