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2016年12月11日托福考試寫作真題
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綜合寫作
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閱讀 Rhino’s relocation plan has some problems and therefore cannot save rhinos from illegal hunters |
聽力 the problems with Rhino’s relocation plan mentioned in the reading are unconvincing and the plan would be effective |
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There is a 5% death rate among rhinos involved in this plan, but every rhino is very precious and it would be pity if they die |
It is true that some rhinos will die because of the plan, but the death rate would be much lower that it is now. Relocating could actually protected them from hunters. |
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In this plan, the balance of male and female rhinos will be disturbed; the bond between mother rhinos and infants will also be destroyed |
The planner will carefully choose rhinos so that the balance between two sexes and the bond between mothers and infants won’t be affected |
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Enormous profit can be gained from rhinos so illegal hunters won’t give up easily |
An army will protect this relocating plan, and there is a very large area so that the hunters will easily find this relocating area. |
獨立寫作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.
這是一道絕對詞題(題干出現the best，the most important等字眼)，反對比較好寫，一個實用易學的破解角度是"承合駁絕"，即承認合理性，反駁絕對性。
三個主體段可以這么寫，
1.承認合理性(這段也可以合并進開頭段)：Visiting museums does have some advantages, i.e. a wide range of carefully selected and beautifully arranged materials;save time and money
2.指出不足：the amount of information in museums is limited and not as lively as when it is presented in real life. Besides, museums usually only provide a singe perspective on major historic events and modern issues.
3.提出更好的 (必要的邏輯環節)：there are better ways to learn about a country like traveling to that country or talking with friends as well as strangers from that country.
另外兩種主體段分段可以是
1.承認合理性
2.problem：the amount of information in museums is limited and not as lively as when it is presented in real life
solution: there are better ways to learn about a country like traveling to that country to see it yourself
3.problem: museums usually only provide a singe perspective on major historic events and modern issues.
Solution: talking with friends as well as strangers from that country provide you additional point of views
一邊倒
1.things in the museum do not look as lively as when it is presented in real life
2.the amount of information in museums is limited and doesn't reflect the diversity of people's interests
3.museums usually only provide a singe perspective on major historic events and modern issues.
如果同意，比較一些其它很好/很重要的方式(必要的邏輯環節)，指出參觀博物館仍是最好的。
范文
Disagree.
Visiting museums is not the best way to learn about a country.
Boasting of a vast collection and combination of various exhibits, museums are an elegant gesture of human civilizations. They provide a scene for us to be immersed in a foreign country without requiring us to step out of our own. To learn best about a country, however, visiting museums can hardly be perceived as a satisfactory way. I would strongly recommend a visit to that country and chat with foreign friends for the following reasons.
First and foremost, museums are unlikely to give an impression as vivid as a real experience does. The verbal descriptions or picture or videos in the museum, no matter how expressive they are, cannot relate to visitors as well as a real setting. If you want to know more about Venice, you need to ride a boat, floating over the river between two arrays of village houses. If you want to know more about Paris, you need to put your feet up to the Eiffel Tower, overlooking the flamboyant colors of that fashion paradise. If you want to know more about New York, you need to wave your hands to the mighty woman with a torch in her hands as if saying "I lift my lamp beside the golden door". None of this kind of exciting experience can be achieved by playing with a miniature, let alone reading a piece of document or watching a short film.
Additionally, as many exhibits as a museum can collect, they are far from enough to represent what a country is truly like. The problem for museums is that they have limited space, so they have to decide what's important and what's not. Museums typically include that country's ancient artifacts and documents of major historical events. And in practice, the judgments of the group of academics that make these decisions don't reflect the great range of interests that people in that country really have. But space is definitely not an issue if you travel to that country or chat with foreign friends or even strangers. That country's history can still be learnt from traveling or chatting with natives, but there can be a great variety of things and topics that accurately reflect the great diversity of interests of people in that country. You get to learn what music they put into ears, what idols they go crazy for, and what food they make at home and delight in at food stands. The diversity of knowledge that travelling or chatting can offer is one of their strongest advantages.
Even on historic issues where museums have expertise, they do not stand a chance against a debate with natives. This is because museums usually only provide a singe perspective on major historic events and modern issues, based on opinions of some authorities. When I learned American history at school, I was curious about what kind of impact that American Revolutionary war, the civil war, the Vietnam War had on its people. Although the school teacher had taken us to the biggest museum in Beijing, I didn't feel so strong about it. It was not until I actually talked in Texas with a veteran from the Vietnam War did I realize how difficult that period of time had been for them. Their opinions were divergent from and supplementary to what's written in the texts in the museum, but their unanimous hope for peace was clear. Had I not been to America, had I not conversed with real people there, I would never have been able to see these things in a multiplicity of angles.
To wrap up, visiting museums is not without its advantages, but to get a clearer picture of what a country looks like, I would encourage you to put your feet on the land of that country or relate to the local people. No doubt you will have a vivid experience, understand what local people are really interested in and see things from perspectives that are very different from museums'.
文章第二個理由段借鑒了Tpo6 綜合寫作聽力素材。其實Tpo綜合寫作就是非常好的語料庫，其中關于合作、商業、文化方面的文章很值得我們學習模仿。當然像這篇范文這樣照搬是不行的，我們需要更多的改寫，這里主要是向同學們示范一種學習的方法，可以事半功倍。這里把第二個理由去掉字數也達到了托福要求。
Tpo6 綜合寫作聽力素材
Third, what's worth knowing about? The problem for traditional encyclopedias is that they have limited space, so they have to decide what's important and what's not. And in practice, the judgments of the group of academics that make these decisions don't reflect the great range of interests that people really have. But space is definitely not an issue for online encyclopedias. The academic articles are still represented in online encyclopedias, but there can be a great variety of articles and topics that accurately reflect the great diversity of users' interests. The diversity of use in topics that online encyclopedias offer is one of their strongest advantages.
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