- 相關(guān)推薦
2014雅思寫(xiě)作7分攻略匯編
雅思寫(xiě)作有兩大主要類(lèi)型題型考試,那么怎么樣能完全掌握這兩項(xiàng)題型呢?如何把雅思寫(xiě)作化成考官大筆一揮的高分呢?雅思寫(xiě)作高分無(wú)疑離不開(kāi)多做歸納、多思考、多練習(xí)。
寫(xiě)作,一直是廣大雅思考生的軟肋,也成為了不少考生申請(qǐng)海外院校和專(zhuān)業(yè)的絆腳石。雅思寫(xiě)作單項(xiàng)7分,在很多人看來(lái)似乎有些遙不可及。實(shí)際上,只要做好“點(diǎn)-線(xiàn)-面”的升級(jí),突破寫(xiě)作瓶頸,7分不再是“天方夜譚”。
一、詞匯升級(jí)
詞匯升級(jí)包括升級(jí)詞匯的廣度和深度。其中前者較好理解,簡(jiǎn)單地說(shuō)就是詞匯量越大越好,特別是在寫(xiě)作中需要表達(dá)同樣或者相似意思的時(shí)候,如果能夠做到多變不重復(fù),那肯定會(huì)給閱卷者留下深刻的印象。比如“重要的/主要的/必要的”這個(gè)意思,幾乎每篇雅思作文中都需要用到,一個(gè)important用到底和crucial,paramount,indispensable換著用的差異性是顯而易見(jiàn)的。而所說(shuō)的深度,引用雅思官方評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的原話(huà)就是“use less common lexical items”。記住,“大白菜”詞匯只能拿到“大白菜”分?jǐn)?shù)。趕緊用sub-standard替換poor-quality, source替換reason,typically替換usually。另外,詞匯的靈活運(yùn)用也是深度的一種體現(xiàn)。比如表達(dá)“科技給我們帶來(lái)好處”,既可以說(shuō)Technology brings us benefits. 也可以說(shuō)Technology benefits us. 還可以說(shuō)We benefit from technology. 又可以說(shuō)Technology is beneficial to us. 也可以表達(dá)為We are the beneficiaries of technology. benefit這個(gè)詞的靈活運(yùn)用充分體現(xiàn)了對(duì)詞匯的理解和運(yùn)用能力。
二、句型升級(jí)
在雅思寫(xiě)作的句型方面,一直存在一個(gè)誤區(qū),就是很多考生認(rèn)為句型越復(fù)雜越長(zhǎng)越好。其實(shí)不然,姑且撇開(kāi)寫(xiě)又長(zhǎng)又復(fù)雜的句子很容易出錯(cuò)不說(shuō),單是從語(yǔ)言的流暢性和閱卷者思路的延續(xù)性角度來(lái)看,這樣的表達(dá)很可能不但不能給文章加分,反而會(huì)弄巧成拙,由于冗長(zhǎng)不地道而被扣分。這里句型升級(jí)是指句型的變化以及對(duì)地道句型表達(dá)的模仿和借鑒。比如在探討現(xiàn)代家庭關(guān)系疏遠(yuǎn)話(huà)題的文章中,一種表達(dá)是So it is not surprising that they do not feel close to their families.另一種表達(dá)是Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated from their families.毋庸置疑,后一種表達(dá)更能吸引考官的眼球。這種句型上的變化從何而來(lái),并非主觀臆想,而是通過(guò)大量閱讀和模仿原版英文材料的寫(xiě)作手法而來(lái)。對(duì)于雅思考生來(lái)說(shuō),如果時(shí)間有限,資源有限,那么劍橋系列中寫(xiě)作部分的考官范文和閱讀部分的文章就是最好的材料了。比如劍6 P168考官范文的開(kāi)頭:Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.模仿借鑒類(lèi)似的句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用到考生自己的作文中去,閱卷的考官怎么可能會(huì)不認(rèn)同呢?
三、內(nèi)容升級(jí)
雅思7分的文章,并非要求考生所寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容標(biāo)新立異,獨(dú)樹(shù)一幟,只要言之有理、言之有物即可,這是由雅思這種標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化考試的類(lèi)型所決定的。但并不是說(shuō),雅思作文內(nèi)容就不重要了,而是考官會(huì)更關(guān)注內(nèi)容的相關(guān)性和內(nèi)容展開(kāi)的邏輯性。有些考生很有想法,一寫(xiě)文章就洋洋灑灑一大片,這是好事,但是雅思這種考場(chǎng)作文在時(shí)間和字?jǐn)?shù)上的限制決定了考生必須寫(xiě)和話(huà)題以及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)有最直接關(guān)系的內(nèi)容,不然就會(huì)出現(xiàn)偏題或者論證重點(diǎn)不夠突出等現(xiàn)象。另一方面,在論證過(guò)程中,前因后果得明確點(diǎn)明,同時(shí)運(yùn)用舉例、對(duì)比、反證等多種論證方法充分證實(shí)觀點(diǎn)和主題。因此建議考生,在廣泛閱讀英文材料和優(yōu)秀范文,積累寫(xiě)作素材的同時(shí),有機(jī)會(huì)最好也能閱讀國(guó)外關(guān)于大學(xué)論文寫(xiě)作的原版書(shū)籍資料,了解歐美人士的文章內(nèi)容構(gòu)架習(xí)慣和常用的論證手段,畢竟雅思作文實(shí)際上就是國(guó)外大學(xué)論文的縮小版,高屋建瓴定會(huì)游刃有余。
通過(guò)“點(diǎn)、線(xiàn)、面”的分析,只要考生能夠做到上述三方面的升級(jí),扎扎實(shí)實(shí)地做好復(fù)習(xí)備考工作,定能突破雅思寫(xiě)作7分瓶頸,相信通過(guò)自己的努力,在雅思考試中你一定可以獲得滿(mǎn)意的成績(jī),使自己夢(mèng)想成真!
雅思寫(xiě)作7分范文:國(guó)防的重要性
As mass production is the core principle of industrial economy, mass destruction becomes the core principle of this age. Warfare, as the result of violence pushed to its utmost abounds, has been posing a great threat to all the nations for a long history.
First, although most of tax money goes into the national defense budget, an ounce of prevention is worth of a pound of cure. After the first-ever atom bomb dropped on the Japanese city on August 6,1945, more than 140,000 people were killed in the atomic blast and tens of thousands of others died from the after effects of radiation. Since then, the technique of battle systems has already gone through several generations.
On the other hand, despite the generally peaceful world, local wars and racial segregations never been disconnected. At the same time, business and governments constantly jockey for advantage over each other, sometimes relying on less-than-legal measures including warfare.
Furthermore, the computer terrorist can inflict damage on millions of people with a single keystroke, sowing fear, suspicion, and doubt. If the terrorisms in "9.11"used the atom bomb instead of aircraft, New York would had been destroyed to empty land. That is the reason why American never gave up his research in military might.
Of course, arguments will be raised against my standpoint. Some people criticize it on the grounds that these problems can be resolved through diplomacy and dialogue. However, in my opinion, the unavoidable Information Warfare will be waged because it can be. History clearly shows that any new technology, regardless of its original intentions, soon finds its way into the warriors. In conclusion, we, no matter individuals or governments, must prepare for the future we are creating.
【雅思寫(xiě)作7分攻略】相關(guān)文章:
雅思寫(xiě)作備考攻略08-30
雅思信函類(lèi)寫(xiě)作攻略10-18
2016雅思寫(xiě)作高分攻略08-01
2016年雅思寫(xiě)作高分攻略10-08
2016年雅思寫(xiě)作備考攻略11-04
2016年雅思寫(xiě)作煉詞四大攻略11-05
雅思詞匯攻略詳解10-01
雅思閱讀做題攻略10-18
雅思寫(xiě)作原則08-09