同位語中又有兩個并列的介詞短語修飾，與其他老師相比摩爾先生更注意教學方法，用強調一般時態的謂語動詞用強調謂語之外的各種句子成分，使用各類從句如使用介詞關系代詞引導的定語從句。
英語寫作練習句子練習
1.Somestudentevencan’twriteanessayinEnglishafterhavinglearneditfortenyear.
2.TheInternethaveplayanimportantrolein
3.TheInternetisbecomingausefulmethodincitiesandsuburbs.
4.Theconvenienceofmobilityhasmademoreandmorepeopledependentonprivatecars
5.Somanypeoplethinkthebestwayofdissolvingtheproblemisbanningtheuseofprivatecars.
6.Juveniledelinquencyisasoserioussocialproblemthatithasreceivedattentionfrommanypeople.
7.Thecomputerhasbroughtmanybenefitstopeople’slives,butatthesametimeithasbroughtmanyproblemeither(causedsomeproblems).
8.Manyyoungpeoplelikestostudynewknowledge.
9.Thesecondreasonisthatourworkisbecomingmoredifficult.
10.Privatecarsoccupymore(room)spaceandcausetrafficjams.
11.Accordingtothesurveyofsomeagencies,moreandmoreyoungpeoplehavelosttraditionalvalues.
12.TheauthoritiesofBeijingshouldtakemoreeffectivemeasurestoreducetrafficjam
13.Ourgovernmentshouldspendsomemoneyto(in)train
professionalpeople.
14.TheITindustryhasbeendevelopingfastfor(inthelast)3decades.
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16.Youngpeopleoftentakecareoftheirparentsathome.
17.Theenvironmentpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.
18.NowChinesepeopleisbecomingmoreandmorerich(richerandricher).
19.Ourindustry(industrial)developmentisbecomingfasterandfaster.
20.Youngpeopleisbecomingmoreselfish,greedy,andarrogantthanever.
21.Publictransporthasmoreadvantagesthanprivatecars
22.Themostremarkabledifferencebetweenoldpeopleandyoungpeopleistheattitudetowardwork.
23.Thepublictransportisplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinacity’stransportationsystem.
24.Themeasureswillsolvetheproblemoftrafficjamseffectively.
25.Everykindofinformationisincreasingfast.
26.Peoplehopetolivemorecomfortably.
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28.Inrecentyears,abouttwo-thirdsofthestudentshavemobilephones.
29.NowthenumberofundergraduatesinChinaisequaltothatinAmerica.
30.Itisobviouslythatpeople’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.
31.Banningtheuseofprivatecarswilldoharmtoeconomicaldevelopment.
32.Ithasbeenprovedthattheuseofthemobilephonecausessomedangerstotheusers.
33.Itisnousetosavemoney.
34.Firstly,traditionalvaluesofoldgenerationincludehardwork,diligence,bravery,honestyandsoon.
35.Noiseisakindofpollution.
36.Mostpeoplethinkagoodeducationcouldhelpthemfindagoodjob.
37.Itisduetothemoreintensecompetitionofoursocieties.
38.Peoplehavelittlesenseofsafetyabouttheirfuture.
39.Individualsshouldbemoreawareoftheimportanceoftrafficregulations.
40.Ithinktheindustrialdevelopmentandtheenvironmentalprotectioniscontradictory.
41.Chinaisadevelopingcountry.
42.Itisbeneficialtooursocietyandchildren.
43.Itisoneaspectofsocialadvance.
44.Sotheyliketopursueaneasyandcomfortablelife.
45.Whileitisanaturalphenomenon.
46.Theautomobileindustrycanalsogiveanincentivetothedevelopmentofotherindustries.
47.Modernpeopletrytosucceedineverything.
48.Youngpeopleareeasytobeaffectedbywesternculture.
49.Thatcanmakeanimalsdie
50.Somestudentschoosetohavealoantopayfortheireducation.
51.Itisobviousthateverypeopleshouldentercollegetostudy.
52.Inchina,thenumberofpopulationexceeds13billion.
53.Onlybythatcantheyperformbrightlyintheseriouscompetition.
54.Privatecarshaveabadeffectonourenvironment.
55.Parentsputtoomuchemphasisonthechildren.
56.Whenyouuseamobilephone,itislikethatyouaresurroundedbythousandsofmicrowaveovens.
57.TheCivilRightsMovementledmanyAmericanstofightagainsttheinequalitybetweenthewhiteandtheblack.
58.Ifyoudon’tdowell,someonewillreplaceyou.
59.Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,people’slifehave
beenimprovedgreatly.
60.Trafficaccidentshaveincreasethenumberoftrafficjams.
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62.Especially,manyfamiliesincitiescanaffordhighertuition.
63.Manyuniversitystudentsdevotethemselvestoconstructingtheirhomeland.
http://m.okwtrl.com ernmentgivesthemnewpolicies,suchaslow-interestloan.
65.Forexample,yougoonvacationwithyourfamilywhileyourcellphoneringscontinuous.
66.Inordertogiveourchildrenabetterlife,wehavetoworkashardaswecan.
67.Iftheydon’twanttobeabandonedbythesociety,theymustworkharderthanbefore.
68.Resourcesarelimited,butthepopulationisincreasing.
69.Thisforcespeopletoworkhard.
70.Inordertomeettherequirementofthemodernsociety.
71.Theindividualsshouldtakeresponsibilitytotheenvironment
高考英語寫作練習句子潤色
寫作訓練一
句子潤色——簡單句的高級句式
簡單句其實也可以不簡單,若將簡單句與非謂語動詞短語、形容詞短語、介詞短語、同位語、獨立主格結構等巧妙地合并在一起,不但可以表達更豐富的內容,而且也使句子變得更精彩,充分顯示你在英語表達上的實力。以下各句選自近年各省市高考寫作范文的高級簡單句,請補充完整，欣賞、熟記、模仿：
1.同位語我想有一個筆友,希望是一個二十出頭且興趣相投的女孩子。(同位語中又有兩個并列的介詞短語修飾)
2.形容詞短語Edisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.出生于美國的托馬斯·愛迪生是一個偉大的科學家和發明家。
3.不定式短語為了學習好,我們需要做體育運動。
4.現在分詞短語在這幅圖中,一個鳥媽媽呆在一棵大樹的鳥巢里,觀看她的鳥仔飛走。
5.過去分詞短語mobilephonesandtheInternetarefasterandmuchmoreconvenient.與信件和公用電話相比,手機和網絡更快也更方便。
6.介詞短語heencouragesustothinkbyourselves.他鼓勵我們獨立思考,而不是馬上告訴我們答案。(insteadof的使用)
[即時練習]按括號中的提示翻譯下列句子。
1.我是李華,四川的一個學生。(同位語)
I’2.與其他老師相比,摩爾先生更注意教學方法。(用過去分詞短語)
3.北京動物園,建于1906年,有100多年的歷史了。(用過去分詞短語)
4.李華在公共汽車站等601公車上去學。(現在分詞短語)
5.我們學生應當通過努力學習而不是考試作弊來獲得好成績。(介詞短語)
6.合并句子:
⑴Themoontravelsroundtheearthonceeverymonth.
⑵Themoonisanaturalsatelliteoftheearth.(現在分詞短語)
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7.合并句子：
⑴Hewaswellknownforhisexpertadvice.
⑵Hewasabletohelpagreatnumberofpeoplewiththeirpersonalaffairs.(過去分詞短語)______________________________________________________________________________1
寫作訓練二
句子潤色---用高級結構讓整個句子靚起來
利用以下各招可給句子潤色,讓句子靚起來。
1.使用強調句
用do,does,did強調一般時態的謂語動詞;用itis...that...強調謂語之外的各種句子成分。直到她摘下眼鏡她父親才認出她。
2.使用倒裝句。只有用這種方法我們才可以學好英語。
3.使用with的復合結構。如：’tgoonstudying.由于那噪音的持續,我無法繼續學習。
4.使用非謂語動詞。thesouthwestcornerofourschool,thebotanicalgardenhasanareaof1000squaremetres.校園西南角/面積1000平方米。
5.恰當使用被動句。最重要的是,必須釆取某些措施來阻止污染。
6.使用各類從句,如使用“介詞+關系代詞”引導的定語從句。
There’中國的茶葉有很多種,其中龍井茶是世界著名的。
7.“數詞+名詞”改用“asmanyas+數詞+名詞”。請多房屋被摧毀,使多達千萬的人失去家園。
介詞短語與with結構強化訓練
根據漢語提示完成英文句子,或用所給詞的適合形式填空。
1.Wearesurethateverythingwillbebetter隨著時間的推移).
2.(一到達),webegantoworkimmediately.
3.做完那些工作之后),weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotect在離開之前),wetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.
4.在比賽的過程中),youshouldfinishyourspeechinfiveminutesandtryyourbesttoexpreyourselfinEnglishfluently.一聽到鈴聲),studentsranintotheclassroomasquicklyastheycould.隨著科學和技術的發展),theworldischangingeveryday.所有的事都做完之后),theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.[用獨立主格結構]由于那噪音的持續),Icouldn’tgoonstudying.
[with的復合結構]隨著社會的快速發展),it’squitenecessarythatwe(should)haveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.
寫作訓練三
句子潤色——非謂語動詞短語和強調結構專練
根據漢語提示完成英文句子,或用所給詞的適合形式填空。
用非謂語動詞短語
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2.Atabout1o-clockthisafternoon，說他明天上午不能在咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)同你見面]asshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.參加英語演講比賽)isahelpfulwaytolearnEnglish.是為了確定我們沒有卷入任何麻煩事).
5.被他的話所感動),Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosing名叫“母親”的一首歌)forthestudents.
用強調結構或倒裝句式直到19世紀末才)shootingearneditsstatusasasport.因為是他們把我們帶到這個世界).我們知道國內外正在發生什么).只有用這種方法我才能)gainmoreconfidence.[用倒裝句式]只因為他有病了)didhenotcometoschool.只有那時,我才認識到)thatIhadbeenwrong.
it句型
根據中文提示完成下列句子。
12.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,就不足為奇了)Ihavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.對我來說有必學會)toliveonmyown.眾所周知)somestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.
15.Aswehaven’覺得困難)tofollowtheteacher.在考試中作弊是錯誤的)becauseitbreakstherulesofschool.
寫作訓練四
句子潤色——簡單句合并成復合句
有時為了使句子的連貫性更強,表達也更為貼切、自然,我們在兩個或者多個簡單句之間加上and,but,or(或者,否則),for(因為),while(而,卻),when(就在這個時候),notonly...butalso等并列連詞,使其成為并列復合句。如：
⑴Ouroutdooractivitywilllastthreehours.We’llbebackatabout11o’clock
→Ouroutdooractivitywilllastthreehoursandwe’llbebackatabout11o’clock.
⑵Youmusthurry.You’llmitheplane.→Youmusthurryoryou’llmitheplane.⑶Honeyissweet.Thebeestings.→Honeyissweetbutthebeestings.
在兩個或者多個簡單句之間加上when,after,as,because,where,which,who等從屬連詞,可以使簡單句變成復合句。如：
⑴WewillorganizeallkindsofactivitiesinourEnglishclub.WecannotonlypractisebutalsolearnmoreEnglishintheactivities.(改為含定語從句的復合句)
→⑵Hemissedthefirstbus.Hecametoschoollate.(改為含狀語從句的復合句)
→即時練習
將下列各組句子合并成并列復合句或主從復合句。
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1.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.
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2.Ourteachermustbeathome.Thedoorisopen.
______________________________________________________________________________
3.⑴Asatelliteisanobject.
⑵Asatellitetravelsinanorbitroundanotherobjectinspace.
⑶Asatelliteiseithernaturalorman-made.
_______________________________________________________________________________
4.⑴Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.
⑵Wecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely.
_______________________________________________________________________________
5.⑴Therewasonceafamousdetective.⑵HewasnamedSherlockHolmes.
⑶HelivedinLondon.⑷Thetimewasattheendofthenineteenthcentury._______________________________________________________________________________
6.⑴TheotherdaywehadanEnglishspeechcontest.
⑵Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.
_______________________________________________________________________________
7.⑴79.3％ofthesurveyedcitizenssaythattheirmainmotivationistohelptheirparentstoliveabetterlife.
⑵67.7％claimthattheyworkhardinordertochangetheirownfate.
_______________________________________________________________________________
8.Wemuststudyhard.Knowledgeispower.
_______________________________________________________________________________
9.⑴Studentscanimprovetheirwritingabilityinthisway.
⑵Theycanstrengthentheirself-confidence.
_____________________________________________________________________
寫作訓練五
強化訓練：并列復合句和主從復合句專練
并列復合句用適當的并列連詞填空。
1.Workhard,_________youwillfail.
2.Workhard,____youwillgetgoodgrades.
3.IworkedhardatEnglishanddevotedallmysparetimetopracticingEnglish，_____Ifailedtopathemid-termexamination.
4.About9:00lastnight,Iwasbusypreparingformytomorrow’stest_____suddenlyloudnoisescameintomyroom.
5.HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,__________48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.
6.Howeversometimeswhenyoumeetsomedifficulties,whenyouquarrelwithothers________whenyoufailindoingsomething,youmayhaveabadmood.
7.NextSaturday,wegoingtopickapplesinavillage20kilometersawayfromourtown,_____allarewelcome.
主從復合句根據漢語提示完成英語句子。
8.Ihavetakenwithme_________________________________________________________(你
叫我幫你還給市圖書館的那兩本書).
9.Wewillmeetat8:00amatthegate,________________________________(一輛藍色的公共汽車將在那里等候).
10.__________________(如果你有興趣),pleasesignupattheofficebefore5:00pmnextThursday_____________________________________(以便我們作必要的安排).
11.Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50%students,_________________________(這在世界排名第一),areshort-sighted.
12.________________________(在他進來后不久),hecriedonhisdesk.
13.Thecausesforshort-sightednearesocomplicated____________________________________(沒有一種藥可以治愈近視).
14.________________________________(如果我是野生動物園的動物),Iwouldfeelannoyed___________________________________(當人們不斷地同我拍照時).
IfIwereananimalinthewildlifeparkwhenpeoplekeepphotographingwithme
15.Hesuggestedthat__________________________________________________(中小學生不要過分使用眼睛,且要多做戶外活動).
16.______________________(使我印象最深的)ishisfamoussaying.“Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration”.
17.______________________(我要強調的是)thateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers.
寫作常見句型綜合訓練
第一部分：
句型1：Thereasonarechieflyasfollows.Firstly,…Secondly,…
理由主要如下：首先……其次……
Thereasonsarechieflyasfollows.Firstlytreescantakeinalotofdioxidewhichisharmfultoourhealth.Secondly,treescanmakeourcitymorebeautiful.
句型2：Actionsshouldbetakento…必須采取措施去……
Actionsshouldbetakentogetridofallkindsofpollution.
句型3：Therearegoodreasonsto…完全有理由去……
Therearegoodreasonstocancelthisimpracticalplan.
句型4：ThereforeIstronglyrecommendthat…因此，我強烈建議……
ThereforeIstronglyrecommendthatweshouldwritemoreinterestingbooksforchildrenincasetheyshouldindulgeinobscenereadings.
句型5：Ahottopicdiscussedtodayis…現在，人們討論的一個熱點問題是......
Ahottopicdiscussedtodayiswhetherweshouldclonehumanbeings.
句型6：Thereisnoevidencetosuggestthat…認為……是毫無根據的
Thereisnoevidencetosuggestthatwemustdependonwesterncountriestodevelopoureconomy.
句型7：Whenitcomesto…manypeoplebelievethat…當說到……時，許多人認為……Whenitcomestoglobalwarming,manypeoplethinkitisdangerousforhumanbeings.句型8：Nowitistimesomethingwasdoneto…現在是采取措施做……的時候了Nowitistimesomethingwasdonetogetridofpollution.
句型9：Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemay…根據以上討論我們可以……
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethatitisnecessarytocollectmoneytobuildabridge.
句型10：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat………是不言而喻的。
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatdoingwellinyourlessonswillmakeyourparentshappy.
用上述句型翻譯下列句子：
1.理由主要如下:首先,吸煙有害健康,其次，吸煙可能引起火災.
2.必須采取措施解決這個問題。
3.完全有理由實施鼓勵儲蓄的計劃。
4.因此我強烈建議學校采取措施保證每個學生的安全.ensurethesafetyofsb
5.現在人們討論的熱點話題是房假是否會持續上漲.(goup)
6.認為學習好的學生就一定事業成功是毫無根據的.(succeedinone’scareer)
7.當說到網絡對青少年的影響時,許多人認為不應該讓孩子遠離電腦.(keepsbawayfrom)
8.現在是采取措施保護這個古廟的時候了.
9.根據以上的討論，我們可以推斷張華就是兇手.(infer,murderer)
10.真正的朋友應該互相幫助是不言而喻的.
第二部分
句型1：Itmustbepointedoutthat…必須指出的是……
例：ItmustbepointedoutthatitisoneofourbasicStatepoliciestocontrolpopulationgrowth.句型2：Itmustbekeptinmindthat…必須記住的是……
例：Itmustbekeptinmindthatthereisnoothersecretofsuccebuthardwork.
句型3：Asisknowntoall…大家都知道……
Asisknowntoall,knowledgeispower.
句型4：Itishardtosay…很難說……
Itishardtosaywhethertheplanispractical.
句型5：Thereisnodoubtthat…毫無疑問……
Thereisnodoubtthatyouwillbehelpedbyothersifyouhaveanydifficulties.
句型6：Totellthetruth…說實話……
Totellthetruth,manymistakeswemadecouldhavebeenavoided.
句型7：Asweknow…我們知道……
Asweknow,itwasnotuntilrecentlythattheproblemwassolved.
句型8：Asfarasweknow…就我們所知……
Asfarasweknow,ittookhimmorethanayeartowritethebook.
句型9：Ithasbeenprovedthat…已經證實……
Ithasbeenprovedthathistheoryisright.
句型10：Haveyouconsidereddoing…?你有沒有考慮過做……？
Haveyouconsideredgoingabroadtostudy?
仿照上面例句翻譯：
1.必須指出的是，英語是我們所學學科中的一門重要學科。
2.必須記住:失敗乃成功之母.
3.大家都知道，有志者事竟成.
4.很難說這個理論是否正確.
5.毫無疑問,只有通過這個方法,我們才能按時完成任務。
6.說實話，我本來是可以早一點的。
7.我們知道,新中國是1949年成立的.
8.就我們所知道,他為人民的解放,耗費了他一生精力.(liberation)
9.已經證實這個計劃是可行的。
10.你沒有考慮過就如何學英語給我一些建議嗎?
第三部分
句型1：Itis/wasobvious/clearthat…很明顯……
Itisobvious/clearthatsheisterriblynervousonstage.
句型2：It’sagreatpleasureto…(感到)非常愉快
It’sagreatpleasuretoworkwithyou.
句型3：It’smygreathonorto…是我莫大的榮幸
It’smygreathonortointroducethegovernor.
句型4：Inorderto…youshould…為了……你應該……
Inordertounderstandthisessayfully,youshouldreadmoreaboutitsauthor.
句型5：Ithinkit(is)ofgreatimportance/value…我認為……很重要。
Ifyouwanttosucceedinlife,Ithinkitisofgreatimportancetosetagoalforyourself.句型6：Isitconvenientforyouto…?你是否方便……？
Isitconvenientforyoutohaveawordwithme?
句型7：Ifitispossible……可能的話……
Ifitispossible,lendmeyourcartonight.
句型8：I’mcuriousaboutsth./todosth.我對（做）……很好奇。
I’mcurioustoknowwhatwashappeningoutside.
句型9：Generallyspeaking…總的來說……
Generallyspeaking,peopleliketohearpraisesfromothers.
句型10：Howlongwillittakeyouto…?……要用多少時間？
Howlongwillittakeyoutorecitesuchapassage?
仿照上面例句翻譯
1.很明顯這種特殊的稻種使得同樣的田地多收獲三分之一的產量.(strainofrice稻種,produce,one-thirdmoreof)
2.跟你相處我感到非常愉快.
3.能有機會想你學習是我莫大的榮幸.
4.為了考大學，你應該學好英語。
5.我認為你制定這個計劃很有價值.
6.你是否方便帶我參觀以下你們的新學校?
7.若可能,我想明天見你。
8.我很好奇，想知道你在做的一切。
9.一般來講,學好英語不是很難。
10.聯合國使世界擺脫貧困要花多長時間？（getridof）
第四部分：
句型1：我認為這是...的一個好機會.：Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyouto..
句型2：看起來好象：Thereseemstobe...
句型3：我認為……是不……：Idon’tthinkitisadj.to…
句型4：我們應該努力地做某事：Weshouldmakeanefforttodo…
句型5：問題是……：Theproblem/questionisthat/whether…
句型6：一方面……另一方面……：On(the)onehand…ontheother(hand)…
仿照上面例句翻譯
1.我想找一找漢語中玩文字游戲的笑話,這是一個好機會.
2.看起來這兩個詞之間好象有點區別.
3.我認為我們應該攜手保護環境。
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5.問題是你能否勸說他放棄他的計劃。
6.一方面我欽佩你的才能，但另一方面我不相信你的判斷力。
英語句子寫作改錯練習
Ⅰ,completesentencesandsentencefragment
1.Thedarkcloudsmeantrainlastnightwedecidedtostayhomeitwasluckyastormflooded
theroads.
2.Therestaurantwastoocrowded.Andnoisyaswell.
3.TheyplannedatriptoTibet.Atriptogetmanynewexperiences.
4.Thecoachleftthefootball.Underthebench.
5.Howweshouldwrite.
6.Iamfromalargefamily,Iwastheoldestchildandhelpedwiththeyoungerones,and,well,I
ampatientbutfirmwithchildren.
7.Itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefields.
8.Sheguidedustotheedgeoftheborderregion,sheleftustofindourownwaytotheoutpost.
9.Popcornoncewasfreenowyoupayforeachserving.
Ⅱ，TypesofSentence
Exercise1:
1.Thedogandcatfoughtinthealley.
2.Johnandhiswifewenttotownandboughtsomeflowersyesterday.
3.Theboysandgirlsstoodinthecornersandgiggledonthefirstdayofdancingschool.
4.Davidnevercomplainsabouthislife;hesimplyacceptswhathasbeenarrangedforhim
byhisGod.
5.TheteacherwasangrybecauseTomwaslateforclaathirdtimeonthatsameday.
6.Tomexplainedthathedidnotfeelverywellthatday.
7.Theywatchedtelevisionandenjoyedthemselvesalotinmakingcommentsonit,andI
don'treadapageforthewholenightbecausetheirnoiserepeatedlyinterruptedme.
Exercise2:sentencesforimprovement
1.Itsleaveswithered.Theydroppedontheground.Therearesomedewsontheleaves.
2.Itwasanearlywintermorning.Thesnowisfallingdown.Thewindisheavilyblowing.
http://m.okwtrl.com hetrashcan,thereisabunchofflowers.Theyareroses.Theylookbeautiful.
4.Onthestreet,thereisanoldanddirtytrashcan.Itissmelly.Butitsshapelookslovely.Itisin
theshapeofaheart.
5.Amanstandsunderthetree.Hehashisbrowsknitted.Thetreeisatthecornerofthestreet.Ⅲ.Unityideascloselyrelatedandacompletethought
1.Leninstudiedveryhard.Hewasthebeststudentinhisclass.
2.Johnlivedsimply(1)andstudiedhard(2).Hewasthebeststudentintheclass(3),and
wasalwaysreadytohelphisfriendswiththeirlessons
3.Apoorstudentinhisprimaryandsecondaryschoolyears,Tedbecameafamous
linguist.
4.ThreecobblerswiththeirwitscombinedequalChukehLiang.
Ⅳ.Coherence1.choppysentences
Faulty:Theteachergaveusanassignment.Itwasacomposition.Thecompositionwasaboutemploymentopportunitiesforuniversitygraduates.Suchopportunitieswerebecomingfewerandfewer.Theteacheraskedustohandintheworkthenextday.Fewstudentsdidso.Whentheteachercametotheclathenextday,helookedveryunhappy.
2.Parallelideashadbetterbeexpressedinparallelstructures
1)Amanshouldbejudgednotbyhiswordsbutbywhathedoes.
2)Webelieveitisveryinteresting,delicate,andastoryofmagic.
3.ambiguousreference
1)Heknewthathedidnotliketogotherewithhim.
2)Theysentachairtotherepairdepartmentthatwasdamaged.
3)IlikeMaryasmuchasJane.
4.danglingmodifiers
1)Ireadanarticleofmyprofessor'sinanewbook,whichdiscussesthedifferencesinkinshiptermsbetweenChineseandEnglish.
2)WhenlearningtospellEnglishwords,spellingrulesshouldbememorized.
3)AnoticeintheBostonHeraldreads:"Asecondfreebabiesclinicwillbeheldatnoon.Dogsmustbe
accompaniedbyanadultonaleash.
5.Ambiguitymayalsoarisefromtheinappropriateshiftinvoice,number,person,tense,moodandaboveallashiftofthethemeortopic,etc.
1)Thosewhohavenotfinishedtheirwork,youshouldreporttotheteacherbyyourselves.
2)Anyonewhowantstouseaforeignlanguagesuccessfullyshoulddevelopnotonlyyour
linguisticcompetencebutyourcommunicativecompetenceandcross-culturalcompetenceaswell.Andinthisprocess,studentsshouldknowthatyoucanonlydependuponyourself.
3)Asyousailacrotheharbor,channelmarkerscanbeseen.
4)Iwouldplaytenniseverymorningandswameveryafternoon.
5)Ienjoyedanicecreamsoda,buttheytendtomakemefat.
6)Everymanshouldhavesympathyforthepooranddisabled.Pleasebemerciful!Moreexercises
1)TheSpringFestivalbringschildrencare-freehappineandgrantspeopleleisured
refreshment.
2)Theteacherwasangry.Astudentwaslate.
3)Inthiswar,manyparentslosttheirsons,manywiveslosttheirhusbands,manychildrenlost
theirfathersandthousandsofpromisingyoungmanmissedtheirbestyearsforschooling.
4)ThefirstthingIdugupwasapieceofcloth.Therewerefivesilverdollarswrappedinit.
5)Morefascinatingabouthimarehislips,palebutfirm,whichmakeyoucan’thelpbelieving
everywordoutofthem.
6)Afterreadingthenovel,whatimpressedmemostishisbravery.
7)Helookssopalethathedoesn’tsayanything.
8)Hisbrotherwasatallman,andhewasagoodfisherman.
9)WhistlingforRover,mycousinputapailinhismouthandwestarted.
10)Ithinkapersonshouldchoosetheirownfriend.
ⅤConciseness1.Faulty:Ihavereadastoryrecently.Thisstoryhappenedintheearly1960s.
2.3.4.5.6.7.8.Faulty:Thecityhasapopulationofhalfamillionpeople.Faulty:Thereisonlyoneinterpretationthatisacceptable.Faulty:Itisyourassignmenttowriteasummaryofthestoryyouhavereadthisweek.Faulty:Thisorphanlosthisparentsattheageofthree.Faulty:Ipulledmyselftogetherandmanagedtoswimbackwithmyarmsandlegs.Faulty:Theoldprofessorhasafacelineddeeplywithwrinkles.Faulty:Sheisofteninthehabitofreadingthemorningpapersaloud.