關(guān)于SAT作文批改實(shí)例講解
Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below:
When people form opinions about someone or something, what affects them most is not substance but style. In other words, the way something appears or is presented is more important than what it actually is. This principle affects how people look at their leaders and their lives, the books they read, the products they buy, and even the subjects they take at school.
Assignment: Is style more important than substance? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
習(xí)作修改
學(xué)生習(xí)作(第一段)
語言修改
Style, of course, is less important than substance. If there is a rotten apple placed in a crystal bowl in front of you, will you eat it happily only for the better style?
Style, of course, is less important than substance. If a rotten apple is placed in a crystal bowl will you happily eat it?
本段評點(diǎn)
本文的開頭比較有特色，第一句話開門見山直接給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，而且觀點(diǎn)明確。第二句話用了一個(gè)比喻加反問，而且這個(gè)比喻十分恰當(dāng)?shù)卣f明了形式與內(nèi)容的關(guān)系，很是引人入勝，吸引閱卷人的注意力。
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