托福寫作真題及范文鑒賞

　　真題回顧

　　A/D: People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families; The help from the government is not necessary.

　　文章點睛：

　　題目大意：人們可以自己或通過家人的幫助來解決生活中的重大問題，所以政府的.幫助是沒有必要的。波波建議此題目選擇不同意，即認為政府的幫助還是很有必要的，思考分論點的方向使用拆分，對題目中的抽象名詞 important problems 拆分具體化為環境問題和教育問題，然后分別展開。

　　參考范文：

　　In a society that changes as amazingly as ours, the role played by government in our daily life has been brought under the spotlight of mass media. Consequently, the general public and sociologists are wondering whether people can solve important problems individually or with the governmental support. Towards such a long running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the help from government is necessary in the process of resolving important problems, especially in the aspects of protecting environment and addressing the disparity of educational resources.

　　In the first instance, consider the environmental issues. As is common sense, the deteriorating natural environment is so severe and complicated that the solution of such a problem is far beyond the reach of any individuals or families. The serious air pollution in China is a good case in point. Despite the fact that people can take some actions such as wearing masks or taking the public transportation to relieve the haze occurring frequently in the major cities of China in some degree, the problem cannot be radically solved. To illustrate, the major cause responsible for the smoggy weather is nothing but the emission of waste gas such as dust and smog from an appalling number of heavy-pollution factories. In this case, it is the government that can get rid of the fundamental cause by shutting down these plants and enacting laws or regulations to restrict their production, which cant be achieved by any individuals.

　　In the second instance, the same logic goes to the educational problems. As is known to all, many school-age children in rural and remote areas are not able to receive education in school due to the lack of educational resources. According to a survey conducted by the Education Ministry in China in 2015, approximately 3 million kids in the Southwest of China didnt have the chance t

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