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2015年托福滿分作文寫作技巧
無論是綜合還是獨立,想拿高分不準備是不行的。那么,托福寫作中如何寫出近滿分的作文?這就要按照ETS的要求,一步一步將該呈現的內容呈現到位了。
第一,概括和組織。
閱讀文章一般結構清晰,觀點明確,學生往往能一眼看出哪個是中心句,哪個是舉例:這種情況很淺顯,學生只需要挑出中心句,然后稍微換上幾個同義詞,或是改動一下句子結構,閱讀的主要觀點便出來了,而且也不是抄襲閱讀的。另外,在中心句不是很明顯的時候,學生則需要分析給的幾句話,或者是從后文的例子與解釋中,去對應觀點句里的關鍵詞,這樣就能鎖定文章的主要觀點了。
第二,自制模板。
綜合寫作模版好使,但不見得這個模版是適合你的。有些模版措辭復雜,句式冗長,而使用了這些模版的人,往往是為了將就模版,限制了自己的發揮:每每寫的文章,200個單詞里面,自創的,只有50個左右。也就是說,除了模版給出來的套話,實際涉及閱讀和聽力觀點和信息的文字,非常的少,內容非常單薄,自然分數不會高過25。
要用模版的話,就用自己的模版。用自己平時說話的自然方式來表的,形成了自己的思維方式,用起來肯定是相當自然的。怎么形成自己的模版呢?用至少20道題練手:看自己是習慣先總結聽力觀點,然后與閱讀觀點一一對應去寫,還是聽力觀點和閱讀觀點分成兩部分去概括,然后再集中論述他們的關系;有了框架,就到實質了。論述的時候,一般的學生都只是一句大話帶過,而沒有將足夠的證據或細節擺上。
這個是我們應該杜絕的。只有簡練到位地論述了,才能體現出閱讀和聽力觀點的關系來。論述就應該:1. 合理使用閱讀和聽力的例子,但不是照抄,而要概括;2. 注意例子和觀點的對應,切忌張冠李戴。3. 閱讀聽力缺一不可,要兩條腿走路。
第三,檢查。
文章寫完后,一定要留出至少3分鐘來檢查。尤其是托福(課程)寫作中的基礎拼寫,時態,以及單復數搭配是否有錯,及時更改。
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托福寫作滿分范文題目:喜歡的居住環境
Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Uses pecific reasons and details to support your choice。
托福寫作滿分作文范文:
I know there are advantages to living in a modern apartment, but I’d prefer to live in a traditional house. My main reason is that I love traditional design. It’s graceful and warm and inviting. I think modern design is very empty and sterile and not very inviting. So, because of the way it looks, I’d choose a traditional house.
I recognize the fact that a modern apartment is going to be in much better shape. Being new probably means all the plumbing works, the roof isn’t going to leak, the windows are properly sealed, and the kitchen appliances are in working order. A traditional house can’t guarantee any of that. In fact, it’s likely that things will break down or need replacement, simply because of age. Still, if the appliances are old, so is the wood, and that’s a big advantage as far as I’m concerned.Very few new buildings have the kind of beautiful woods that were used years ago. It’s something that can’t be copied.
Space is always important to me, too. I need a lot of room for my home office, my clothes, and to display all the knickknacks I’ve picked up in my travels. I also like to have interesting space. I don’t want all the rooms and windows the same size or a boxy design. A modern apartment usually comes in one size and shape. A traditional house is going to have a variety of spaces where I can put a little table or a window seat. And it will have lots of room, from basement to attic. These are all good reasons for me to prefer living in a traditional house.
Some people love modern design, but it’s not for me. The space and beauty of a traditional home are more important to me than having everything new and perfect.
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