2016年雅思作文寫作秘密武器：長難句

　　其實，對于寫作論點方面，中國的學生普遍缺乏creative thinking，因此在邏輯微有瑕疵的前提下，如何拿到6.5或者7以上的高分呢?

　　這就來源于你的語法結構 grammer range and accuarcy，如何寫好complex structure。也就引出我們今天的主題：

　　正確用長難句給大作文加分

　　內容摘要：

　　■長難句會給大作文加分么?

　　■長難句分為哪幾種?

　　■如何正確的寫好長難句?

　　長難句會加分么?

　　高分的寫作要求我們有語法的豐富度，也就是時態，語氣與語態的結合，除此之外還要有多變的句式結構(復雜句加簡單句)

　　其中，復雜句是最能考驗一個學生語言功底的句子，正確的架構一個長難句對于考官來說，無疑是一個高分亮點。

　　eg.Many schools are eager to hire experienced employees.(簡單句)

　　eg.Many schools are eager to hire employees who possess the organisational skills needed to complete the duties associated with teaching.(復雜句)

　　但這并不意味，所有的句子都得由長難句來完成，長難句是起到畫龍點睛之筆，偶爾也需要短句來調節考官的閱讀節奏。

　　(要注意所有論點的提出只能用簡單句)

　　因此，可以負責任的說，長難句的存在對于作文分數的提高有著至關重要的作用。

　　(想知道怎樣正確的寫出長難句么，哼，不點贊的人我不告訴他)

　　長難句分為哪幾種?

　　所謂英文的復雜句，從本質上來說不過就是兩個(或者兩個以上)簡單句和連詞的疊加。

　　基礎結構為：

　　(連接詞)+主+謂+賓+(連接詞)+主+謂+(賓)

　　當然亦可以通過“嵌套”出更為復雜的復雜句，但一般高分作文的復雜句只含有一個主句和1~2個從句及少量短語，再輔以簡單句和并列句。

　　Take it easy,我們并沒有變態到到讓你寫出3、4個從句的長難句。

　　細分一下長難句的種類，可以主要分為以下幾種

　　1.主句+從句

　　例如：

　　Some citizens take it for granted that environmental problems should be resolved by government alone without any personal effort.(用it作為形式賓語的賓語從句)

　　2.倒裝，強調或者虛擬

　　例如：

　　(1)Strange as I may seem,parent's attention sometimes hinder student's academic performance in school.(倒裝)

　　(2)It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.(強調)

　　(3)If sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虛擬)

　　3.長句加短語的結合

　　例如：

　　Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be effective stragegy for improving air quality,especially in cities.(動名詞作主語)

　　4.用連詞進行列舉

　　例如：Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for exampleby installing exercise equipment in parks.

　　怎么寫出正確的長難句

　　根據第二部分給出的長難句種類，現在我們來仔細研究一下句子的主要框架結構。

　　1.主句+從句

　　(1) 賓語從句：someone take it in account(認為)

　　someone take it into granted(認為什么理所當然)

　　it 作為形式賓語(高分用法)

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　　(2)高端定語從句：及物動詞/介詞 +the extent to which+句子

　　eg.The government must consider the extent to which environmental problems can be resolved.

　　▼

　　(3)主語從句：That+句子+makes it+adj+(for sb )to do sth /句子

　　eg.That the government invests more in arts,like music and painting makes it possible that the cities and town will become a more attractive place to live in.

　　▼

　　(4)非謂語結構：Given +名詞/ Given that+句子

　　eg.Given that most young couples are too occupied to cinsider having babies,it is therefore imperative that they put off their parenthood.

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　　2.倒裝，強調或者虛擬

　　(1)倒裝：Only...can.../Not only...but also.../Be it...or(不管是...還是...)

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　　(2)強調：It is...that.../It is...who(正是......導致了......)

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　　(3)虛擬：If...were...,...would...(注意在虛擬語氣中，this和that后都要用were而不是was)

　　3.長句加短語的結合

　　例如在句子后面加入限定成分especially in citits/coutries/modern society, both in cities and on motorways, in this respect,ect.

　　eg.A person needs to fell that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.

　　4.用連詞進行擴展

　　例如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等等

　　eg.Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well as benifit.

　　※in terms of(在......方面),for the sake of(為了改善......) ,regardless of(不管......) 其實也是復雜句的三大絕活。

　　例如：(1)This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.

　　(2)......for the sake of their healty

　　(3) regardless of price

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