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英語六級寫作范文

　　英語六級考試就要到了，不少考生還在擔心自己的六級作文。下面，小編送上兩篇英語六級寫作范文，供大家參考。

英語六級寫作范文

　　英語六級寫作范文一

　　Directions ： For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?

　　You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below ：

　　1.有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運

　　2.也有些人認為數字和運氣無關

　　3.試說明你的看法

　　Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?

　　As regards lucky numbers, there has been a heated discussion amons the general public in our society. Some people believe that lucky numbers will bring them good luck. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion (86. 5 percent) of people spare much money to get their telephone numbers or car numbers to include the number “8"，which, for them, means making a fortune.

　　By contrast, others hold that such kind of idea only caters to psychological need and is purely misleading. Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts.Instead, many count their good fortune on lucky numbers just to get a disappointing result.

　　As far as I am concerned，I would lend my support to the second opinion because I firmly believe that “ Opportunities are only for the prepared mind”. Only when every member of the society makes efforts to win luck with his own hands can we expect him to forget about the lucky numbers. (165 詞)

　　一句話點評

　　毫無疑問，第一段的一個百分比吸引了閱卷老師的眼球。 conduct, a high proportion of, spare much money 等詞和短語的運用，給閱卷老師留下良好的第一印象。注意:該篇文章是個例外，將“一句話”放在了第一段，是因為很容易舉出數字的例子來說明“有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運”的論點,傳統思維中，一想到數字和運氣, 總會想起8或6等;而相反第二段反對這種觀點則不好構思例子。

　　快捷構思

　　第一段:在模板句引入話題后接著提出首段中心“有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運”。而后“一句話”數例為具體現車牌號含有“ 8 ”這個數字，希望自己能走運。

　　第二段:開門見山展現段落中心“有些人認為數字和運氣無i關”，并用 Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts 來支持這個觀點。

　　第三段:直接展現自己的觀點，并提出一個簡要的原因•• Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.

　　美麗詞句

　　1.cater to psychological need 滿足心理上的需求

　　2.purely misleading 完全誤導人的

　　3.real efforts 真正的努力(優于 hard work)

　　4.just to get a disappointing result 而僅僅得到一個失望的結果(不定式在這里表結果，是絕大部分同學不會主動使用的'表達)

　　5. Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.機會留給有準備的人。(諺語的使用也是文章的一個亮點)

　　英語六級寫作范文二

　　Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should One Expect Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below ：

　　1.有的人認為應該有回報

　　2.另外的人認為應該像雷鋒一樣不要回報

　　3.我的看法

　　Should One Expect Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

　　As regards reward when doing a good deed, there has been a heated discussion among; the general public in our society. People who believen its necessity argue that without proper reward,those who have done good deeds may sometimes be at a loss in finding themselves sacrifice a lot while others show much indifference.

　　By contrast, others hold that reward when doing a good deed is of no necessity. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a high proportion (83.8 percent) of people believe that we should learn from Lei Feng, who has long been set as an outstanding example to encourage us to spare no efforts to help those in need，without ever asking for any reward. In their opinion， helping others is an indispensable part of virtues.

　　As far as I am concerned, rewards are by no means the trigger or purpose of conducting good deeds. What really matters is that we should take the initiative to help others who are in trouble. (166 詞)

　　“一句話”點評

　　毫無疑問,第二段的一個百分比和大寫的Chirui抓住了閱卷老師的眼球。同時還使用了 conduct, a high proportion of等好詞和 who引導的非限制性定語從句,這將給閱卷老師留下良好的第一印象。注意:比較對照型的第一段有一個比較長的模板句，所以建議把 “ 一句話”放在第二段，或具體呈現現象’或作為數例支持前面論點。

　　快捷構思

　　如本范文第一、二、三段篇幅對比和劃線部分模板詞句所示，比較對照型的`整篇構思清晰明了。而且，除第一段第一句為模板句引入話題外，其他段落首句皆為段落中心句(即題目所給提綱)，第一段的第二句前半句緊跟著為段落中心，完全符合“黃金3原則”的謀篇原則。

　　第一段:在模板句引人話題后接著提出首段中心“有的人認為做好事應該有回報”，并用一負面假設說出不好結果來支持段落中心。

　　第二段:開門見山展現段落中心“有些人認為做好事應該不要回報”。而后“一句話”數例支持前面論點,說明大多數的人支持這一觀點。

　　最后一句同義說明：幫助他人是不可缺少的美德。第三段:直接展現自己觀點，倡導我們大家幫助那些需要幫助的人。

　　美麗詞句

　　1.be at a loss 迷茫

　　2.be set as an example 被樹立為榜樣

　　3.spare no efforts to 不遺余力

　　4.indispensable 不可缺少的(優于 necessary，important 等表達

　　5.by no means絕不是(強調語氣，比普通的“not”更能準確傳達思想)

　　6.take the initiative起帶頭作用，倡導