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2016下半年英語四級作文范文及點評
英語四級寫作話題，一般都會出現一些當今比較熱門的話題或者是比較有爭議性的話題。下面是yjbys網小編提供給大家關于英語四級作文范文及點評，希望對同學們的備考有所幫助。
篇一：Pickpocketing
Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. While waiting for a bus, a woman took her wallet out and paid for a newspaper at a nearby newspaper booth,. After putting her wallet back into her handbag she began to look through the new titles when a middle-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. Swiftly, her wallet was in the man’s hand.
The crazy pickpocketing has become a national epidemic and poses a grave threat to the residents’ and visitors’ property safety. Pickpocketing prevention, which is a tough task for police, makes senses. All sides involved in this problem must join their efforts to remove this social cancer.
Everyone shares the huge responsibility for demonstrating their justice at proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious society.
點評
描述一次親眼目睹的事實，一次引出全文的主題。Witness用詞準確。Brush此處為動詞，說明小偷推擠的動作想說子拂過般既輕又快，描述生動形象。含有諷刺意味的Swiftly與句中的動詞brush呼應，自然承接前一句。
指出扒竊行為的危害，crazy，National epidemic和poses a grave threat to等詞表現出此危害的嚴重性。Tough和句中的比喻social cancer意在譴責此類卑劣行徑。
最后兩句話呼吁大家攜手努力，消除扒竊，共建和諧社會，點明文章主題。
篇二：Haste Makes Waste
The Proverb “Haste makes waste” has been widely accepted for many years. It reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a (1)down-to-earth way. (2)The truth of it is deep and profound.
(3)There are numerous examples supporting this argument. (4)A case in point is the ancient Chinese story of (5)“Helping the shoots grow by pulling”. This story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss. (6)For another example, some parents and teachers,(7①) in order to improve children’s academic performance in a short time, tend to put too heavy burden on children. This, (7②) as a result, brings the children(8) nothing but great pressure.
(9)All the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldn’t(10) be over anxious for quick results. Everything has its own (11)developing law. Therefore, (12)whatever we do, we should not pay too much attention to the speed and ignore these laws.
點評
(1)意為“腳踏實地”。
(2)意為“其中蘊涵著深遠的道理”
(3)用于引出例證。
(4)意為“典型的例子”。
(5)引用“拔苗助長”的故事
(6)用于引出另外的例子
(7)插入語
(8)意為“只是，僅僅”。
(9)常用于得出結論
(10)意為“急于求成”。
(11)意為“發展規律”。
(12)引導讓步狀語從句，意為“無論什么”。
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