My birthday為題目的作文

　　My birthdayYesterday was my birthday. I invited my good friends to my home. they buyed me many nice presents.Before the party. I open all the presents one by one.They give me some surprise.They are all liked by me. Of them, I like the book best. Because it is written in English,I can pratice my English.After seeing the presents ,We have an interesting party, We danced and played some games .I feel we all enjoy ourselves and this is the best party that I hold.

　　1.“they buyed me many nice presents.Before the party. I open …”此句中句首字母要大寫，“buyed”應改為“bought”，“open”應改為“opened”.注意時態及詞形變化規則。

　　2.“They give me some surprise.”因敘述過去的事，應為一般過去時，故“give”應改為“gave”。

　　3.單詞“pratice”應改為“practice” 。

　　4.“We have an interesting party, We danced and played some games .I feel we all enjoy ourselves and this is the best party that I hold.”應該使用一般過去時，所以“have”應改為“had”,“feel”應改為“felt”,“enjoy ”應改為“enjoyed”“is ”應改為“was”,“that I hold”定語從句時態為過去完成時較好，故”“old”應改為“had held”。

　　本文語句連貫，句意通順。內容具體。但存在單詞，標點和語法錯誤。

　　本主題由 admin 于 2016-11-14 10:07 移動

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