六級作文參考范文及點評
Part V Writing
Directions: In this section you are required to write a composition on the topic “Reduce Waste on Campus”. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1． 目前有些校園內浪費現象嚴重；
2． 浪費的危害；
3． 從我做起，杜絕浪費。
Reduce Waste on Campus
As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.
The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. If they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.
As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What’s more, I’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus. (196 words)
本文為典型的問題—解決型文章，是老師在上課時重點強調的“舊酒”內容之一。第一段舉出幾個例子，第二段從三個方面：對自己的`影響，對集體（家庭或學校），對社會（國家），第三段解決辦法是從自己延伸到他人和社會。另外，連接詞，被動句，主語從句，定語從句，狀語從句，舉例，倒裝，承上啟下的用法等都是好文章的必備要件。
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