文筆不好沒什么華麗辭藻但是哥很注重實用性請務必耐心看完,注意論據三點有時一下子想不出來你就可以舉例可以說,應采取適當的措施當努力去做,考研英語作文萬能模板一共寫十七個句子。
考研英語作文模板好句子
文筆不好,沒什么華麗辭藻,但是哥很注重實用性,請務必耐心看完。
那么,我今天接著來談談英語大作文怎么去寫。
其實大作文無非就是考察三段式。第一段,就是考察我們描述事件的能力,第二段是關于事件的分析能力,第三段也無非就是對事件的看法或者評價又或者是解決方法。其實這三段內容就是我們以后入研究生之后,需要用到的一種能力。以后看專業學術書,又或者寫論文時能用上。
進接著話題,我們第一段,就是描寫圖片怎么寫?不要想太多,你想太多反而無從入手,就按部就班,圖上什么樣,你就簡單的描述。你想得太復雜,反而寫不出來。這里點播一下大家,我們要背的不是作文的整個模版或者整篇文章,因為那既不可能也沒必要,背的是自己認為好用的句子,這種句子就是要用很強的兼容性,放之四海而皆準的。然后背多了,寫作文時就一定要給我想辦法用上去。作文不是為了寫作文去寫的......,而是為了我們以前背過的句子,想辦法在文章中把他很好地使用出來,想辦法把他套上去。并不是我們為了論證一個東西,去編一個什么句子,而是用我們以前背過的大量句子去組織,說得簡單點,你寫這句話的目的,就是因為你以前背過,你就是要寫這句話,所以你才套上去的...明白了嗎?大量的事實證明,你只要背過很多兼容性的句子,到時候順手一堆句子。
開頭很簡單,基本就是Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture....therestanda....,a...one,...ing...itisnotdifficulttodeducethatthecartoonistintendstoshowusa(n)....message/emergingproblemthat...however,thisphenomenonorproblemhasstirredaheateddiscussionamongthepeopleallovernation.或者,thisphemomenonhascausedwidepublicconcern.就這么套,圖片簡單描述,圖片簡單說明,馬上要說明這個圖片反映的是什么現象和趨勢,一定是現象,問題或者趨勢,不可能很狹隘,就圖片而圖片。
中段就是說明問題,中段寫的方式有很多,基本上可以分為三個層次,特別注意論據,英文寫作論據并不要求很好的證明觀點,本質是看你句子表達能力,已經三層式的結構組織。你只要從三個不同方面來組織,用出要的句子結構,就是高分,不用去管三個論據有沒有邏輯關系,或者遞進,并列,根本不用去考慮,關鍵是每個層次里面是否有符合句子。
千萬別用first,second,third,這種傻忽忽的詞,給大家一個規范用詞
firstofall/tobeginwith/aboveall
inthesecondplace/inthesecondinstance
lastbutnotleast/insummary
注意論據三點有時一下子想不出來,你就可以舉例,可以說someexpertpiontsoutthat.../take...ininstance.../accordingtotheinvestigationco
nductedthisyearindicatesthat.../somestatisticsexposethat...
最后結論
Inaword,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat....
下面是我自己整理歸納的句子,有很大的兼容性,你只要背熟,自己選自己說著順口的,不一定全要背出來,到考試的時候,為了展示這些句子,就寫出來,寫作文的容易一定是我們背過的句子把大展示出來,不是讓你就作文寫作文,一再強調!
1.asfaras...beconcerned[就...而言]
http://m.okwtrl.com [對...沒好感]
3.anincreasinglynumberof...[越來越多的...]
4.pointout...[指出]
http://m.okwtrl.com ntribute(directly)tosth...[(直接)有助于...]
http://m.okwtrl.com [應采取適當的措施/當努力去做]
7.bequestionedby...[受到質疑]
8.noonecandenythefactthat...[不可否認]
9.anrecentinvestigationindicatedthat...[最近一項調查表明]
10.tendtohavefarourableattitudetowardssth...[受到歡迎]
http://m.okwtrl.com [視而不見/聰而不聞]
12.payaheavypricetodosth.[為做某事付出巨大代價]
13.themostsignificantaspectofsth.[最重要的是]
14.makeitpossibleforsbtodo[使某人做某事成為可能]
15.beobligedtoadmitthefactthat[不得不承認]
16.sparenoefforttodo[不歇余力做某事]
17.theinformationI`vecollectedformanyyearsleadmetobelievethat...[從我這些年所收集的信息使我相信]
18.poseatremdousthreattosth.[給...造成巨大威脅]
19.produceafar-reachinginfuenceonsth.[對...產生巨大影響]
http://m.okwtrl.com [生活在幻想中/腳踏實地或面對現實]
考研英語寫作必備的好句子模版英語寫作高分利器
1.隨著經濟的繁榮withtheboomingoftheeconomy
2.隨著人民生活水平的顯著提高withtheremarkableimprovementofpeople'slivingstandard
3.先進的科學技術advancedscienceandtechnology
4.為我們日常生活增添了情趣addmuchspice/flavortoourdailylife
5.人們普遍認為Itiscommonlybelievedthat…
6.我同意前者(后者)觀點Igivemyvotetotheformer/latteropinion.
7.引起了廣泛的公眾關注Sth.hasarousedwidepublicconcern./Sthhasdrawngreatpublicattention.
8.不可否認Itisundeniablethat…
9.熱烈的討論/爭論aheateddiscussion/debate
10.有爭議性的問題acontroversialissue
11.就我而言/就個人而言AsfarasIamconcerned,/Personally,
12.有充分的理由支持besupportedbysoundreasons
13.雙方的論點argumentonbothsides
14.發揮日益重要作用playanincreasinglyimportantrolein…
15.對…必不可少beindispensableto…
16.正如諺語所說Astheproverbgoes:
17.對…產生有利/不利的影響exertpositive/negativeeffectson…
18.利遠遠大于弊Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.
19.導致,引起leadto/giveriseto/contributeto/resultin
20.復雜的社會現象acomplicatedsocialphenomenon
21.責任感/成就感senseofresponsibility/achievement
22.競爭與合作精神senseofcompetitionandcooperation
23.開闊眼界widenone'shorizon/broadenone'svision
24.學習知識和技能acquireknowledgeandskills
25.經濟/心理負擔financialburden/psychologicalburden
26.考慮到諸多因素takemanyfactorsintoconsideration
27.從另一個角度fromanotherperspective
28.做出共同努力makejointefforts
29.對…有益bebeneficialto/beconduciveto…
30.為社會做貢獻makecontributionstothesociety
31.打下堅實的基礎layasolidfoundationfor…
32.綜合素質comprehensivequality
33.致力于/投身于becommitted/devotedto…
34.應當承認Admittedly,
35.不可推卸的義務unshakableduty
36.滿足需求satisfy/meettheneedsof...
37.可靠的信息源areliablesourceofinformation
38.寶貴的自然資源valuablenaturalresources
39.因特網theInternet(一定要由冠詞,字母I大寫)
40.方便快捷convenientandefficient
41.在人類生活的方方面面inallaspectsofhumanlife
42.環保的材料environmentallyfriendlymaterials
43.社會進步的體現asymbolofsocietyprogress
44.大大方便了人們的生活Sthhasgreatlyfacilitatedpeople'slives.
45.對這一問題持有不同態度holddifferentattitudestowardsthisissue
46.在一定程度上tosomeextent
47.理論和實踐相結合integratetheorywithpractice
48.…必然趨勢anirresistibletrendof…
49.日益激烈的社會競爭theincreasinglykeensocialcompetition
50.眼前利益immediateinterest/short-terminterest
51.長遠利益long-teminterest
52.…有其自身的優缺點…hasitsownmeritsanddemerits/prosandcons
53.對…有害doharmto/beharmfulto/bedetrimentalto
54.交流思想/情感/信息exchangeideas/emotions/information
55.跟上…的最新發展keeppacewith/keepabreastwiththelatestdevelopmentof…
56.…的健康發展thehealthydevelopmentof…
57.重視attachgreatimportanceto…
58.社會地位socialstatus
59.把時間和精力放在…上focusone'stimeandenergyon…
60.擴大知識面expandone'sscopeofknowledge
61.身心兩方面bothphysicallyandmentally
62.有直接/間接關系bedirectly/indirectlyrelatedto…
63.導致很多問題giveriseto/leadto/spellvariousproblems
64.可以替代think的詞believe,claim,maintain,argue,insist,holdtheopinion/belief/viewthat
65.緩解壓力/減輕負擔relievestre/burden
66.優先考慮/發展…give(top)prioritytosth.
67.與…比較comparedwith…/incomparisonwith
68.可降解的/可分解的材料degradable/decomposablematerial
69.代替replace/substitute/taketheplaceof
70.提供就業機會offerjobopportunities
71.反映了社會進步的mirrorthesocialprogress/advance
72.增進相互了解enhance/promotemutualunderstanding
73.充分利用makefulluseof/takeadvantageof
74.承受更大的工作壓力sufferfromheavierworkpressure
75.保障社會穩定和繁榮guaranteethestabilityandprosperityofoursociety
76.更多地強調putmoreemphasison…
77.適應社會發展adaptoneselftothesocialdevelopment
78.實現夢想realizeone'sdream
79.主要理由列舉如下Themain/leadingreasonsarelistedasfollows:
80.我們還有很長的路要走Westillhavealongwaytogo.
考研英語作文萬能模板:一共寫十七個句子.doc
考研英語作文萬能模板:一共寫十七個句子
所謂萬能這個概念,如果大家都去這么用的話,就等于沒有用了。PartB部分是有的,但是partA沒有,PartB可以基本上把這個文章全寫完的一個模板方式。萬能模板,你這么想,大家告訴我,只要一個題目能夠轉變成一社會現象之后,最好準備兩到三套大的萬能無敵模式。關于萬能模式的幾個問題:
一、我們選用的句子的靈活性強,經過了精心的選擇
二、句型都是五星級,并在開頭和長短句子方面有設計,并注意語法的豐富,每句話語法都不同.
三、我們選的句子與市面的任何資料都不同
四、很多同學說寫的一樣是否是雷同,不大可能,因為很難分到一個考場批判危害性的框架
總共寫十七個句子.
第一段四個句子,第一句宏觀描述圖畫,并談圖畫看似可笑但發人深思.第二句寫出圖畫最強烈的視覺效果,第三句是主題句,談用二十個單詞的爆發力句型談該現象對個人的發展和進步有破壞性,并引發思考,第四句是用貶義詞批判這個現象是強烈的指責。
第二段七個句子,首先第一句從宏觀上談這種現象的總的有兩到三個點危害或者原因,第二句談這個現象的第一個危害,用“notonly,butalso”的五星級句子,通常是談對個人身心健康的危害性,第三個句子談第二個危害,通常是用一個豪華級的比較級的句子,讓老師耳目一新,通常是談這個現象對社會的危害.第四個句子談對家庭或學校的危害.第五個句子談一個代替“forexample”的十五個單詞的好句子,意思是說沒有更好的例子來證明正如下文.第六個句子是例子群體的出現,談根據一項調查表明,80%以上的人只要從事經歷過這個消極的現象一定會對個人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句話是預測趨勢的二十五個單詞的鉆石級的句子,談以下預測趨勢,表明這種現象再這樣下去,就會導致惡劣的結果出現,甚至是毀滅性的后果。
第三段六個句子,第一個句子是下個結論,談解決問題的必要性.第二個句子是第一個建議談的是加強立法懲治這個現象,第三個句子談提高人們的覺悟關于著這個現象能提高人們對這個現象的覺悟.第四個句子談個諺語,談一下實踐我的建議的重要性.五個句子談解決的任重道遠.第六個句子是解決問題之后的美好的未來。
第一段
(1)Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,,whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbutthought-provokingonsecondthoughts.(2)Themoststrikingfeaturethatimpressesmedeeplyisthatunbelievably,,(3)Recentfewyearshaswitnessedaphenomenonof主題whichseemstobedisastroustoindividualsurvivaland
prosperity.(4)Thisphenomenonof主題shouldbecondemnedseverelyormadeillegal.
(5)Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.
中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害,并舉例論證,預測危害的趨勢
(1)Toaccountfortheabove-mentionedphenomenon,severalseriouseffectshavebeenputforward.(2)Tobeginwith,主題notonlyresultsdoesharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealthbutalsoresultsinafrustratingandhumiliatinglife.(3)Inaddition,nothingismoreharmfulthan主題tocontradictwithaharmonioussociety.
(4)Lastbutnottheleast,noissueisasharmfulas主題toincreasefamilyburdens,whichisathreateningsituationweareunwillingtosee.(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,63.93%ofyoungpeoplewhohaveeverexperienced主題willliveadulllifeorevenfeelloofhopeaboutthefuture.(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomyfutureofsomething.
最后一段要強調解決問題,談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識,加強執法
(1)Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itistherefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivemeasuresaretakentoprevent主題.(2)Ontheonehand,weshouldbesensibletostrengthentheenforcementofthelawstoprotectsomething.(3)Ontheotherhand,itisdemandingforustokeeppeopleawareoftheimportanceofsavingsomebodyoutoftheevilhandsofdestruction.(4)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.(5)Althoughthefightagainstitislong-standingandtremendousone,oureffortswilleventuallypayoff.(6)Onlywhenyouattentiontoitcanyouseeacolorfulandharmoniousfuturebettersoonerorlater.
積極有利型的文章
第一段談的是三個句子,第一,二個句子都是在描述圖畫,第三句子這個現象對社會發展的積極的現象,第四個句子是圖畫簡單,寓意深刻.
第二個段子,第一個句子談一個十二個單詞的爆發力的主題句,第二個句子談這個現象的永恒的社會含義,用一個三十五個單詞的鉆石級的排比句子,談只要有這個現象就可以讓我們不斷有意義的事情,征服挑戰和競爭,并最后走向成功.第三個可以從反面談如果沒有這個積極現象,人們生活就憂悶,有挫折感,無前進動力,前途渺茫.第四個句子談有兩個大的好處.第五個句子談第一個好處,通常是讓生活豐富,有效率.再談第二個好處通常是談一些個人發展或社會進步的好處.第五個句子是代替forexample的五星級的句子.第六個是具體的舉例子,談根據一項調查表明,80%的人只要利用這個積極的現象就容易改變人生,提高素質.也可以單獨舉個性例子,第七個句子是倒裝句子談只有這個現象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者
第三個段子首句談二十五個單詞的超豪華的句子,談無論做大事還是小事,無論做難事還是容易事,都要這個積極現象.第二個句子談有兩點建議讓它變的更好.第三個句子談讓它
變的更好的第一個方法,通常發揮它的好處,避免壞處.第四個句子談第二個方法,第五個句子談個諺語,第六個談解決任務的任重道遠.第七個倒裝句談只要有這個積極現象就會享受一個美好,豐富和有活力的未來.
文章以團隊精神為例子
(1)Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,(描述圖畫).(2)Themoststrikingfeatureis(圖畫重點信息).(3)Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.
(1)Asissymbolicallyrevealedinthesetofdrawings,thefactthat(重復上面的圖畫信息)profoundlyindicatesthatteamworkismomentous(重要的)and
fundamentaltoanyonewhoundertakesgreatdeeds.(2)Undoubtedly,itisteamworkthatkeepsuscontinuallydoingsomethingvaluableandadmirableinspiteofdifficulty,thatmakesusstillfullofenergytofacethecomingchallengesandcompetitionandthatoffersusthefoundationforthecomingsuccess.(3)Ifwedonnotcooperatesincerely,wewillliveadullanddepressinglifeandfeelfrustratedandhumiliatedorfeelloofhopeaboutthefuture.(4)AsfarasIamconcerned,thereareseveraladvantagesthatcanbegivenasbelow.Tobeginwith,nothingismorebeneficialthanteamworktoovercomeourdefectsandimproveourefficiency.
(5)Secondly,noissueisasgoodasteamworktomakeourlifemorecolorfulandenergetic.(6)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.(7)Apersonwhoisassignedvariousjobsalongtheproductionlineswillmakeamejustbecausenoonecanbeproficientinallthethings.(8)Onlybycooperatingwithotherpeoplecanyouputyourcapacitiesintofullplayandcanyoubethewinnerinthesociety.
(1)Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itadmitsofnodoubtthatindoingthingswhethergreatorsmalltherearemoreorledifficulties,itismuchbetterforonetoinvolveyourselfintoateamwork.(2)Itistherefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivemeasuresaretakentomakeyourteamworkmoreefficient.(3)Ontheonehand,weshouldbesensibletobereceptivetootherpeople’sopinionsandbenefits.
(4)Ontheotherhand,itisdemandingforustobealwayshelpfulandhonesttootherpeople.(5)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.(6)Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyoumakeitbettersoonerorlater.
第三部分、寫作模板——辯論式議論文
模版(一)
Somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that觀點1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat觀點2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.
Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,論據1.Moreimportantly,論據2.Mostimportantofall,論據3.
Insummary,總結觀點.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat預測.
模版(二)
PeopleholddifferentviewsaboutX.Somepeopleareoftheopinionthat觀點1,whileotherspointoutthat觀點2.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.
Foronething,論據1.Foranother,論據2.Lastbutnottheleast,論據3.Toconclude,總結觀點.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat預測.
模版(三)
ThereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleaboutX(爭論的焦點).Somepeopleareoftheviewthat觀點1,whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat觀點2.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.Thereasonsareobvious.
Firstofall,論據1.Furthermore,論據2.Amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.Thatis,論據3.
Anaturalconclusionfromtheabovediscussionisthat總結觀點.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat預測.
第二部分、寫作模板——提綱式作文
一、說明原因型
模塊(一)
Nowadays,therearemoreandmoreXXinsomebigcities.Itisestimatedthat(1).WhyhavetherebeensomanyXX?Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Thefirstoneisthat(2).Besides,(3).Thethirdreasonis(4).Tosumup,themaincauseofXXisdueto(5).
Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething,(6).Ontheotherhand,(7).AllthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberofXX.注釋:
(1)用具體數據說明XX現象;
(2)原因一;
(3)原因二;
(4)原因三;
(5)指出主要原因;
(6)解決建議一;
(7)解決建議二。
范文:Generationgapbetweenparentsandchildren
Nowadays,therearemoreandmoremisunderstandingbetweenparentsandchildrenwhichisso-calledgenerationgap.Itisestimatedthat(75percentagesofparentsoftencomplaintheirchildrensunreasonablebehaviorwhilechildrenusuallythinktheirparentstoooldfashioned).
Whyhavetherebeensomuchmisunderstandingbetweenparentsandchildren?Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.
Thefirstoneisthat(thetwogenerations,havinggrownupatdifferenttimes,havedifferentlikesanddislikes,thusthedisagreementoftenrisesbetweenthem).Besides(duetohavinglittleincommontotalkabout,theyarenotwillingtositfacetoface).Thethirdreasonis(withthepaceofmodernlifebecomingfasterandfaster,bothofthemaresobusywiththeirworkorstudythattheydon’tspareenoughtimetoexchangeideas).Tosumup,themaincauseofXXisdueto(lakeofcommunicationandunderstandingeachother).
Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething(childrenshouldrespecttheirparents).Ontheotherhand,(parentsalsoshouldshowsolicituefortheirchildren).Allthesemeasureswillcertainlybridgethegenerationgap.模塊(2)
Inrecentyears,xxhascausedaheateddebateon(1).
Thefactorsfor(2).Firstofall,(3).Then,therecomesacasethat(4).Moreover,(5).Especiallywhen(6).
Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbecollectedtheoremindpeoplethat(7).Inthisway,weshouldbehavejustlike(8).
范文:TheimpactofTelevision
Inrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,80percentofallhomesinChinahavesatelliteTV,offeringasmanyas50channels.Ithascausedaheateddebateon(theimpactoftelevisiononchildren).Manyparentsareworriedabouttheimpactofsomuchtelevisiononchildren.
Thefactorsfor(parentsworryisthatchildrenareindulgeintelevisionandspendtoomuchtimeonit.).Firstofall,(withsomanyprogramstochoosefrom,childrenarenotgettingasmuchexerciseastheyshould).Then,therecomesacasethat(somestudieshaveshowthatexcessivewatchingoftelevisionbymillionsofchildrenhasloweredtheirabilitytoachieveinschool).Moreover,(theeffectonchildren’smindsaremoreseriousthantheeffectonchildrensbodies).Especiallywhen(thechildrenaretoosmalltojudgewhatprogramsaresuittothem).
Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbeconnectedtoremindparentsthat(theyshouldpaycloseattentiontoandresponsibilitiesforsupervisingtheirchildrensTVviewing).Inthisway,childrenwillnotbeinfluentedtoodeeply.
模塊(3)
Currently,XXhasbeentheorderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory---nothingismorevaluablethanXX.
Itisclearthat(1).Ifyou(2),asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou(3).Failurewillbefollowingwithyou.Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.
Noonecandenyanotherfactthat(4).Youdonnthavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,inrespectthatweallknow(5).
Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon(6).Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink(7).
注釋:
1:XX的第一個優點
2:支持XX的做法
3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二個優點
5:舉例證明優點二
6:說明XX優點三的影響
范文:Theimportanceofself-confidence
Currently,self-confidencehasbeentheorderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory---nothingismorevaluablethanself-confidence.
Itisclearthat(self-confidencemeanstrustinonesabilities).Ifyou(arefullofself-confidence,itwillbringyourcreativepowertoplay,arouseyourenthusiasmforwork,andhelpyouovercomedifficulties),asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou(havenoconfidenceinyourself,thereislittlepossibilitythatyouwouldeverachieveanything).Failurewillbefollowingwithyou.Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.
Noonecandenyanotherfactthat(self-confidencegivesyoulightwhenyouareindarkandencouragementwhenyouaredismayed).Youdonnthavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,inrespectthatweallknow(thesecretofMMe.Curieliesinpreserverenceandself-confidence,thelatterinparticular).
Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon(theachievementofonesambitions).Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink(hethatcanhaveself-confidencecanhavewhathewill).
模塊(4)
Formostofustoday,(1).
Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy(2)areasfollows.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,is(3).Second,(4).Thethirdreason,actually,is(5).Thesignificancefor(6).Therefore,(7).
注釋:
(1)人們針對XX的態度和舉措
(2)歸納現狀
(3)第一個原因
(4)第二個原因
(5)第三個原因
(6)重申造成現狀的最重要原因
(7)我的建議
范文:pollution
Mostofustoday(recognizethatenvironmentalpollutionhasbeenagreatlyseriousproblem.Lotsofplantstreescorpsaredestroyedbybadair.Manyfishdieofpoisonouswater.Thousandsofpeoplediefromeatingpoisonedfishorbreathingingas.Therefore,environmentalpollutionshouldberesponsibleforthesediseasesthataredisabling,orbringingdeathnotonlytohumanbeings,
butalsotowildlife.)
Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy(environmentarepollutedmoreandmoreseriously)areasfollows.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,is(thereasonofharmfulsubstancesintoenvironment.Forexample,topreventinsects,farmersmakeuseofgreatamountsofinsecticides,soastohavebumperharvests.However,theypolluteair,waterandland).Second,(thegascomingfromthecarenginesandfactoriesalsomakeenvironmentpollutedbadly).Thethirdreasonactuallyis(theresultofagrowingpopulationintheworld.Everyday,somuchlitterandwastearepouredoutfromhouses,alsopollutetheenvironment).
Thesignificancefor(controllingpollution)notedthatitshightimethatmoreeffectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Therefore,(newlawsshouldbepassedtolimittheamountofpollutantsfromfactories.Moreover,inthehouseholds,thereisanobviousneedtoreducelitterandwaste.Letsmakeourgoodefforts,andtheworldwillbeasaferplacetoliveforus).
模塊(5)
Thesedaysweoftenhearthat(1).Itiscommonthat(2).
Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?Foronething,(3).Foranother,(4).Whatismore,since(5),itisnaturalthat(6).
Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthtrying.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas(7)toimprovehepresentsituation,andIdobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture.
注釋:
(1)提出論題
(2)說明現狀
(3)理由一
(4)理由二
(5)理由三
(6)理由三引起的后果
(7)解決方法
范文:pollutionofenvironment
Thesedaysweoftenhearthat(ourlivingconditionsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousbecauseofthedestructionofourenvironment).Itiscommonthat(manytreesandanimalsarenearextinction,andtheall-importantfoodchainhasbeendestroyed.)
Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?Foronething,(thepopulationoftheworldisincreasingsorapidlythattheworldhasbeensocrowded.).Foranother,(theoveruseofnaturalresourceshasinfluencedthebalanceofnaturalecology).Whatismore,since(theindustrialrevolution),itisnaturalthat(agreatnumberoffactorieshavebeenspringinguplikemushrooms.Thesmokeandharmfulchemicalsreleasedfromfactoriesalsopollutetheenvironment).
Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthying.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas(plantingmoretrees,equippingcarswithpollution-controldevicesandlearningtorecyclingnaturalresources)toimprovethepresentsituation,andidobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture.
二、觀點評論式
模塊(一)對立觀點式
A.有人認為X是好事,贊成X,為什么?
B.有人認為X是壞事,反對X,為什么?
C.我的看法。
SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat支持X的第一個原因。Theyalsoarguethat支持X的另一個原因。
However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反對X的第一個理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:一個例子。
Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的有一個壞處。
模塊(二)批駁觀點式
A.一個錯誤觀點。
B.我不同意。
Manypeoplearguethat錯誤觀點。Bysayingthat,theymean對這個觀點的進一步解釋。Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat一個例子。(AccordingtoasurveyperformedbyXonagroupofY,almost80%ofthem贊成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。
Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。模塊(三)社會問題(現象)式
A.一個社會問題或者現象。
B.產生的原因
C.對社會和我們生活的影響
D.如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)
E.前景的預測。
Nowadays,thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial/economic/environmentalproblem.(Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic).Accordingtoasurvey,調查內容說明這種現象的情況。(或者是一個例子)。
Thereareacoupleofreasonsboomingthisproblem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
Xhascausedsubstantialimpactonthesocietyandourdailylife,whichhasbeenarticulatedinthefollowingaspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
AdozenofmeasuresaresupposedtotaketopreventXfrombringingusmoreharm.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
Basedontheabovediscussions,Icaneasilyforecastthatmoreandmorepeoplewill..
作文的開頭
一篇文章通常可分為三個部分,即開頭、正文和結尾。這三個部分安排是否得體,直接影響到文章的質量。
文章的開頭一般來說應盡量做到開門見山,用簡單明白的敘述引出文章的話題,使讀者了解文章要談論什么,一下于引起讀者的興趣。
作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種:
1.開門見山,揭示主題
文章一開頭,就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“HowISpentMyVacation”(我怎樣度假)的開頭是:
ISpentmylastvacationhappily.
下面是題為"Honesty"(談誠實)一文中的開頭:
Honestyisoneofthebestvirtues.Anhonestmanisalwaystrustedandrespected.Onthecontrary,onewhotellsliesisregardedasa"liar",andislookeduponbyhonestpeople.
2.交代人物、事情、時間或環境開頭
在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環境交待清楚。例如"ATriptoJinshan"(去金山旅游)的開頭:
ThedaybeforeyesterdaymyclawentonabustriptoJinshan.Thebusridetheretookthreehours.Thelongtripmadeusverytired,butthesightofthebeautifulsearefreshedus.
3.回憶性的開頭
用回憶的方法來開頭。例如"ATriptotheTaishanMountain"(泰山游)的開頭是:
IremembermyfirsttriptotheTaishanMountainasifitwereyesterday.
4.概括性的開頭
即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如“TheHappineofReadingBooks”(讀書的快樂)的開頭:
Peopleoftensaythatgoldandsilverarethemostvaluablethingsintheworld.ButIsaythattoreadbooksismorevaluablethananythingelse,becausebooksgiveusknowledgeandknowledgegivesuspower.
5.介紹環境式的開頭
即開頭利用自然景物或自然環境引出要介紹的事物。如“AnAccident”(一場事故)的開頭是:Itwasarainyandwindymorning.Theskywasgloomy,thetemperaturewaslow,andthestreetwasnearlyempty.Iwasonmywaybacktoschool.Suddenly,aspeedingcarcameroundthecorner.
6.交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什么問題等。如"PollutionControl"(控制污染)的開頭:
InthisarticleIshalldrawyourattentiontothesubjectofpollutioncontrol.