這是避免寫錯句子的一種有效的辦法，他是因為愛我的錢才同我結了婚，這樣既能把意思表達得更明了又能減少寫錯句子的幾率，從各地來的學生中有許多是北方人，天氣轉晴了這是我們沒有想到的。
英語寫作中句子的表達
英語寫作中句子的表達
高考英語書面表達要求內容充實，句式豐富，用詞準確，行文連貫，思路清晰，過渡自然。要想達到這一目的，句子的正確運用和表達是至關重要的。高考書面表達不僅要求學生正確運用語法規則，即結構完整，主謂一致，時態、語態準確，還要有效的使用并列、轉折、遞進、因果、比較等表達方式，同時“運用較多的語法結構和詞匯”進行表達。
［學習過程］
一.句子的基本結構和表達方式
1.簡單句
Earlyinthemorning,wesetoutattheschoolgate.
TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.
MuchofCanadaiscoveredbyforests,butinChinatheareaofforestismuchless.
Wecansende-mailsanywhereatanytimeandgetthelatestinformationthroughInternet.
2.復合句
（1）狀語從句
Thecarhitthemanwhenhewascrossingthestreet.（時間）
Assoonaswegottothecampsite,westartedtoputupthetentandcookfood.
WhereverIam,Iwillbethinkingofyou.（地點）
Shetooksomebookswithhersothatshewouldgetboredduringthelongjourney.（目的）Aslongaswedon’tloseheart,wewillfindawaytoovercomethedifficulty.（條件）Althoughitisdifficult,wewilltryourbesttofinishitontime.(讓步)
（2）定語從句
YuanLongping,whoisapioneerofagriculture，iscalled“thefatherofrice”.
WechoseBeijingWorldParkasourdestination,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing.
（3）名詞性從句
Wherewearegoingthisweekendhasn’tbeendecided.(主語從句)
Myideaisthatweshouldsticktoouroriginalplan.（表語從句）
Thefactthattheearthisseriouslypollutediswell-known.（同位語從句）
Idon’tknowwhetherTomwillcometothepartytonight（賓語從句）
（4）非謂語動詞
Surroundedbyavarietyofbuildings,wefoundourselvesdeeplyabsorbedinthesight.Welefttheparkfeelingjoyful.
HavinggraduatedfromSouthwestAgricultureCollegein1953,hedevotedtofindingwaystogrowmorerice.
Itisunnecessarytoarguewithhimaboutit.
Thebookexplainshowtosolvetheproblem.
3．固定搭配的結構
Itwasthisparkthatwasfullofhistoryandfun.（強調結構）
AsthedestinationislocatedinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,wehadtospendonehourandahalfgettingtherebybus.Uponarrival,wevisitedLincolnMemorial.
WewenttoBeijingWorldPark,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,inordertoseetheworld-famousarchitecture.
YuanLongpingisknownasapioneerofagriculture.
Walkingthroughtheparkwasafeastfortheeyes.
Thewholeworldcouldbenefitfromhiswork.
Hisgreatcontributiontoagricultureisofgreatimportance..
Insteadofbeingsatisfiedwithhiswork,hewasdrivenbyastrongdesiretocontinuetodevelophisrice.
Forhisgreatachievement,hewashonoredbyChinesegovernment.
二.英文寫作中常見錯誤句型分析
1.粘連句
Beijingisabeautifulcity,Ienjoylivinghere.
2.句子結構不完整
Therearemanypeopleagreetokeeppetsathome.
Althoughpetsmaypollutetheenvironment.
3.不平衡結構
Thenewhouseislarge,beautifulandhasenoughroomsforpeopletolivein.
Thereisagreatdifferentbetweendiningoutandtohaveasnackathome.
4.懸空修飾
ComparingwithZhongguancun,SiliconValleyisfarmoredeveloped.
Tofinishthetaskperfectly,morepracticeshouldbedoneahead.
5．漢語式英語
WhowillinsteadofMiGreen?
Weallagainstallkindsofterroristsactivities.
Therewere20peoplediedinthecaraccident.
Don’tworry.Yourbodywillgetwellsoon.
Iwasverygladtohearfromherletter.
Thefilmhadbegunfor5minuteswhenIgottothetheatre.
Thewesternpartofthecityrainedheavilyyesterdayevening.
Ourschoolhavetakenplacegreatchanges.
WelcomeyoutovisitBeijing.
三.寫作中常用的句型結構
1.Heworkedveryhardinordertoachievehisgoal.
2.Havingwalkedthewholeday,weweresotiredthatwecoulddonothingbutsleep.
3.Nomatterwhatproblemhefaces,henevergivesup.
4.Itistoolongajourneytomakeinonedaybycar.
5.You’dbetterstartbyintroducingyourself.
6.Tompreferstostayuplatetofinishtheworkratherthanleaveitdonethenextday.
7.Forestscannotonlyfreshtheairbutalsoreducenoises.
8.YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupatheexam.
9.Heissuchaboringmanthathelikesneitherentertainmentnorlearning.
10.Footballaswellascomputergamesispopularwithyoungpeople.
11.Everyoneisbusyintheclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.
12.Beijinghasapopulationof13million,makingitoneofthelargestcitiesinChina.
13.Thedistancefromeasttowestisover5,500kilometersandthecountrycovers6oftheworld’s24timezones.
14.Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathadhappened.
15.Itisnogoodtalkingwithoutthinkingcarefully.
16.Peoplefinditimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.
17.ItistenyearssinceImethimlasttime.
18.Itwon’tbelongbeforewegraduatefromthisschool.
19.ItisconvenientforustobeabletogetlotsofinformationthroughInternet.
20.Ittookusquitesometimetocollectsomuchinformation.
21.It’stimeforustoleavethepark.
22.Itisfriendshipthatwevaluemost.
23.Itistimethatwedidsomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.
24.Theybelieveittheirdutytohelpthoseinneed.
25.Itissaidthatmorechanceswillbegiventothestudents.
26.ItisknowntoallthatChinaisacountrywithalonghistory.
27.Asisknowntoall,the29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingin2016.
28.Whatexcitedmemostgreatlywasthatmynovelhadbeenpublished.
29.Thereisabeautifulgirllivinginthesmallvillageatthefootofthemountain.
30.ThereasonwhyIwaslatewasthatIcaughtinthetrafficjamthismorning.
31.Thereusedtobealibrary,butnowithasbeentorndown.
32.Thereisnodoubtwhetherheisfitforthejob.
33.Tomygreatsurprise,hemanagedtocompletethetaskonlyinacoupleofdays.
34.Ihadarolloffilmdevelopedlastweek.
35.Thankstoourefforts,everythingisgoingsmoothly.
36.I’mnotsurewhenIsawherlast.
37.Butfortherain,weshouldhavehadapleasantjourney.
38.Iwasabouttogooutwhenthetelephonerang.
39.Somepeoplewastefoodwhileothersdon’thaveenough.
40.Hewassotiredthathefellasleepwithhisshoeson.
41.Onceyouarehere,listentoyourteacher’sinstructions.
42.ThepopulationinandaroundSanFranciscoisnowtentimesmorethanitwasin1906.
43.ThemoreyoupracticeEnglish,theeasieritbecomes.
44.TheChinesedietisconsideredtobethehealthiestintheworld.
http://m.okwtrl.com lephonesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.
46.Besideshisworkinphysics,hespentalotoftimeworkingforhumanrightsandprogress.
47.Insteadofgoingtothebank,theywilluseacomputerandatelephonetochangemoneyandtopaytheirelectricitybillsandsoon.
48.Thatisbecausethisprofessorhasdiseasewhichpreventshimfromspeaking.
49.Althoughmanyfamiliesbecameseparated,peoplestillkeptintouchwitheachother.
50.ChinaDailyhasallusualsectionsofnewspaper,includingHomeNews,InternationalNews,BusineNewsandSportsnews.
英語寫作中句子的構思表達
一、代入法
這是進行英語寫作時最常用的方法。同學們在掌握一定的詞匯和短語之后，結合一定的語法知識，按照句子的結構特點，直接用英語代入相應的句式即可。如：
◎他從不承認自己的失敗。
Heneveradmitshisfailure.
◎那項比賽吸引了大批觀眾。
Thematchattractedalargecrowd.
◎他把蛋糕分成4塊。
Hedividedthecakeintofourpieces.
二、還原法
即把疑問句、強調句、倒裝句等還原成基本結構。這是避免寫錯句子的一種有效的辦法。如：
◎這是開往格拉斯哥的火車嗎?
IsthisthetrainforGlasgow?
還原為陳述句：ThisisthetrainforGlasgow.
◎他是因為愛我的錢才同我結了婚。
Itwasbecausehelovedmymoneythathemarriedme.
還原為非強調句：Becausehelovedmymoney,hemarriedme.
◎光速很快，我們幾乎沒法想像它的速度。
Sofastdoeslighttravelthatwecanhardlyimagineitsspeed.
還原為正常語序：Lighttravelssofastthatwecanhardlyimagineitsspeed.
三、分解法
就是把一個句子分成兩個或兩個以上的句子。這樣既能把意思表達得更明了，又能減少寫錯句子的幾率。如：
◎我們要干就要干好。
Ifwedoathing,weshoulddoitwell.
◎從各地來的學生中有許多是北方人。
Therearestudentsherefromalloverthecountry.ManyofthemarefromtheNorth.
四、合并法
就是把兩個或兩個以上的簡單句用一個復合句或較復雜的簡單句表達出來。這種方法最能體現學生的英語表達能力，同時也最能提高文章的可讀性。如：
◎我們迷路了，這使我們的野營旅行變成了一次冒險。
Ourcampingtripturnedintoanadventurewhenwegotlost.
◎天氣轉晴了，這是我們沒有想到的。
Theweatherturnedouttobeverygood,whichwasmorethanwecouldexpect.
◎狼是高度群體化的動物，它們的成功依賴于合作。
Wolvesarehighlysocialanimalswhosesuccedependsupontheircooperation.
五、刪減法
就是在寫英語句子時，把相應漢語句子里的某些詞、短語或重復的成分刪掉或省略。如：
◎這部打字機真是價廉物美。
Thistypewriterisverycheapandfineindeed.
注：漢語表達中的“價”和“物”在英語中均無需譯出。
◎個子不高不是人生中的嚴重缺陷。
Notbeingtallisnotaseriousdisadvantageinlife，
注：漢語說“個子不高”，其實就是“不高”。也就是說，其中的“個子”在英語中無需譯出。
六、移位法
由于英語和漢語在表達習慣上存在差異，根據表達的需要，某些成分需要前置或后移。如：
◎他發現賺點外快很容易。
Hefounditeasytoearnextramoney.
注：it在此為形式賓語，真正的賓語是句末的不定式toearnextramoney。
◎告訴我這事的人不肯告訴我他的名字。
Themanwhotoldmethisrefusedtotellmehisname.
注：whotoldmethis為修飾theman的定語從句，應置于其后。
◎直到我遇到你以后，我才真正體會到幸福。
ItwasnotuntilImetyouthatIknewrealhappiness.
注：notuntil為英語中的固定句式，其意為“直到才”。
七、分析法
指根據要表示的漢語意思，通過進行語法分析和句式判斷，然后寫出準確地道的英語句子。如：
◎從這個角度看，問題并不像人們一般料想的那樣嚴重。Seeninthislight,thematterisnotasseriousaspeoplegenerallysuppose.
注：分詞短語作狀語時，其邏輯主語應與句子主語一致，由于thematter與sec之間為被動關系，故see要用過去分詞seen。
◎我沒有見過他，所以說不出他的模樣。
Nothavingmethim,Icannottellyouwhatheislike.
注：如果分詞的動作發生在謂語動作之前，且與邏輯主語是主動關系，則用現在分詞的完成式。
八、意譯法
有的同學在寫句子時，一遇見生詞或不熟悉的表達，就以為是“山窮水頸了。其實，此時我們可以設法繞開難點，在保持原意的基礎上，用不同的表達方式寫出來。如：
◎湯姆一直在擾亂別的孩子，我就把他攆了出去。Tomwasupsettingtheotherchildren,soIshowedhimthedoor.◎有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.◎你可以同我們一起去或是呆在家中，悉聽尊便。Youcangowithusorstayathome,whicheveryouchoose.
2016高考英語寫作講解與訓練--作文寫作基礎(寫作中句子的表達)
高考英語作文寫作基椽—英語寫作中句子的表達
一.教學內容：
英語寫作中句子的表達
高考英語書面表達要求內容充實，句式豐富，用詞準確，行文連貫，思路清晰，過渡自然。要想達到這一目的，句子的正確運用和表達是至關重要的。高考書面表達不僅要求學生正確運用語法規則，即結構完整，主謂一致，時態、語態準確，還要有效的使用并列、轉折、遞進、因果、比較等表達方式，同時“運用較多的語法結構和詞匯”進行表達。
［學習過程］
一.句子的基本結構和表達方式
1.簡單句
Earlyinthemorning,wesetoutattheschoolgate.
TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.
MuchofCanadaiscoveredbyforests,butinChinatheareaofforestismuchless.
Wecansende-mailsanywhereatanytimeandgetthelatestinformationthroughInternet.
2.復合句
（1）狀語從句
Thecarhitthemanwhenhewascrossingthestreet.（時間）
Assoonaswegottothecampsite,westartedtoputupthetentandcookfood.
WhereverIam,Iwillbethinkingofyou.（地點）
Shetooksomebookswithhersothatshewouldgetboredduringthelongjourney.（目的）Aslongaswedon’tloseheart,wewillfindawaytoovercomethedifficulty.（條件）Althoughitisdifficult,wewilltryourbesttofinishitontime.(讓步)
（2）定語從句
YuanLongping,whoisapioneerofagriculture，iscalled“thefatherofrice”.
WechoseBeijingWorldParkasourdestination,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing.
（3）名詞性從句
Wherewearegoingthisweekendhasn’tbeendecided.(主語從句)
Myideaisthatweshouldsticktoouroriginalplan.（表語從句）
Thefactthattheearthisseriouslypollutediswell-known.（同位語從句）
Idon’tknowwhetherTomwillcometothepartytonight（賓語從句）
（4）非謂語動詞
Surroundedbyavarietyofbuildings,wefoundourselvesdeeplyabsorbedinthesight.
Welefttheparkfeelingjoyful.
HavinggraduatedfromSouthwestAgricultureCollegein1953,hedevotedtofindingwaystogrowmorerice.
Itisunnecessarytoarguewithhimaboutit.
Thebookexplainshowtosolvetheproblem.
3．固定搭配的結構
Itwasthisparkthatwasfullofhistoryandfun.（強調結構）
AsthedestinationislocatedinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,wehadtospendonehourandahalfgettingtherebybus.Uponarrival,wevisitedLincolnMemorial.
WewenttoBeijingWorldPark,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,inordertoseetheworld-famousarchitecture.
YuanLongpingisknownasapioneerofagriculture.
Walkingthroughtheparkwasafeastfortheeyes.
Thewholeworldcouldbenefitfromhiswork.
Hisgreatcontributiontoagricultureisofgreatimportance..
Insteadofbeingsatisfiedwithhiswork,hewasdrivenbyastrongdesiretocontinuetodevelophisrice.
Forhisgreatachievement,hewashonoredbyChinesegovernment.
二.英文寫作中常見錯誤句型分析
1.粘連句
Beijingisabeautifulcity,Ienjoylivinghere.
2.句子結構不完整
Therearemanypeopleagreetokeeppetsathome.
Althoughpetsmaypollutetheenvironment.
3.不平衡結構
Thenewhouseislarge,beautifulandhasenoughroomsforpeopletolivein.
Thereisagreatdifferentbetweendiningoutandtohaveasnackathome.
4.懸空修飾
ComparingwithZhongguancun,SiliconValleyisfarmoredeveloped.
Tofinishthetaskperfectly,morepracticeshouldbedoneahead.
5．漢語式英語
WhowillinsteadofMiGreen?
Weallagainstallkindsofterroristsactivities.
Therewere20peoplediedinthecaraccident.
Don’tworry.Yourbodywillgetwellsoon.
Iwasverygladtohearfromherletter.
Thefilmhadbegunfor5minuteswhenIgottothetheatre.
Thewesternpartofthecityrainedheavilyyesterdayevening.
Ourschoolhavetakenplacegreatchanges.
WelcomeyoutovisitBeijing.
三.寫作中常用的句型結構
1.Heworkedveryhardinordertoachievehisgoal.
2.Havingwalkedthewholeday,weweresotiredthatwecoulddonothingbutsleep.
3.Nomatterwhatproblemhefaces,henevergivesup.
4.Itistoolongajourneytomakeinonedaybycar.
5.You’dbetterstartbyintroducingyourself.
6.Tompreferstostayuplatetofinishtheworkratherthanleaveitdonethenextday.
7.Forestscannotonlyfreshtheairbutalsoreducenoises.
8.YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupatheexam.
9.Heissuchaboringmanthathelikesneitherentertainmentnorlearning.
10.Footballaswellascomputergamesispopularwithyoungpeople.
11.Everyoneisbusyintheclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.
12.Beijinghasapopulationof13million,makingitoneofthelargestcitiesinChina.
13.Thedistancefromeasttowestisover5,500kilometersandthecountrycovers6oftheworld’s24timezones.
14.Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathadhappened.
15.Itisnogoodtalkingwithoutthinkingcarefully.
16.Peoplefinditimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.
17.ItistenyearssinceImethimlasttime.
18.Itwon’tbelongbeforewegraduatefromthisschool.
19.ItisconvenientforustobeabletogetlotsofinformationthroughInternet.
20.Ittookusquitesometimetocollectsomuchinformation.
21.It’stimeforustoleavethepark.
22.Itisfriendshipthatwevaluemost.
23.Itistimethatwedidsomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.
24.Theybelieveittheirdutytohelpthoseinneed.
25.Itissaidthatmorechanceswillbegiventothestudents.
26.ItisknowntoallthatChinaisacountrywithalonghistory.
27.Asisknowntoall,the29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingin2016.
28.Whatexcitedmemostgreatlywasthatmynovelhadbeenpublished.
29.Thereisabeautifulgirllivinginthesmallvillageatthefootofthemountain.
30.ThereasonwhyIwaslatewasthatIcaughtinthetrafficjamthismorning.
31.Thereusedtobealibrary,butnowithasbeentorndown.
32.Thereisnodoubtwhetherheisfitforthejob.
33.Tomygreatsurprise,hemanagedtocompletethetaskonlyinacoupleofdays.
34.Ihadarolloffilmdevelopedlastweek.
35.Thankstoourefforts,everythingisgoingsmoothly.
36.I’mnotsurewhenIsawherlast.
37.Butfortherain,weshouldhavehadapleasantjourney.
38.Iwasabouttogooutwhenthetelephonerang.
39.Somepeoplewastefoodwhileothersdon’thaveenough.
40.Hewassotiredthathefellasleepwithhisshoeson.
41.Onceyouarehere,listentoyourteacher’sinstructions.
42.ThepopulationinandaroundSanFranciscoisnowtentimesmorethanitwasin1906.
43.ThemoreyoupracticeEnglish,theeasieritbecomes.
44.TheChinesedietisconsideredtobethehealthiestintheworld.
http://m.okwtrl.com lephonesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.
46.Besideshisworkinphysics,hespentalotoftimeworkingforhumanrightsandprogress.
47.Insteadofgoingtothebank,theywilluseacomputerandatelephonetochangemoneyandtopaytheirelectricitybillsandsoon.
48.Thatisbecausethisprofessorhasdiseasewhichpreventshimfromspeaking.
49.Althoughmanyfamiliesbecameseparated,peoplestillkeptintouchwitheachother.
50.ChinaDailyhasallusualsectionsofnewspaper,includingHomeNews,InternationalNews,BusineNewsandSportsnews.